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Post by ricochet6-Mandrake on Jul 12, 2020 5:22:31 GMT
Want to reword the effects of two of Mandrake's attacks in all forms they appear.
Magical Game: Creates illusions with no offensive presence. The illusion lasts two posts unless hit. (Cooldown of two posts)
Clouded Darkness: Renders himself invisible for two posts. If he is hit while invisible the effect wears off.(Cooldown of two posts)
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Post by Amelie on Jul 12, 2020 20:26:21 GMT
Done.
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Post by ricochet6-Mandrake on Aug 4, 2020 0:26:05 GMT
Adding another merc to Mandrake please. Digimon Name: Lothar Junior Alias: LJ Default Form: Rookie Gender: Male Alignment: Choatic Good Skills/Talents: Strategist Karate Inventory:Personality:(150 Words) As Punimon and Tsunomon he is an energetic and playful digimon with bit of an affinity for mischief, though it is never of malicious intent. Even from birth he seems to be quite astute and observant. After digivolving from those forms his love of mischief has lessened but is still there. He is intelligent which allows him to adapt well as a strategist. He is a friendly guy with a that can come off as charasmatic and charming. He is somewhat flirtatious when he sees someone he is attracted to but, since he is relatively young, his flirting will sometimes backfire. When it does, he doesn't let it get him down for long with him easily recovering for his dissapointment Due to being the son of Mandrake and Lothar he was taught to be streetwise in both the Digital World and Human World. However he can also be a bit reckless and hotheaded at times and can get into trouble because of it. As a fighter he is disciplined and serious but he can be arrogant at times which can lead to trouble for him. Appearance in Holosuit:
In his holosuit LJ takes on the form of a teenage human of African descent. He is tall but not near as tall as Lothar in this disguise. He also has a lean body with a slight muscle tone with short black hair and brown eyes. He wears a black short sleeve tee shirt and a green jacket over it. His shoes are also the same shade of green that his jacket is. His wears grey jeans to complete the outfit. FaceClaim: DEFENDERS OF THE EARTH • Lothar Jr.(LJ) • Lothar Jr(LJ) [played by ricochet] Personal History:(200 Words) Ever since Mandrake and Lothar got back together they began journeying together and, sometime after achieving their respective champion levels of Wizardmon and Leomon, the two childhood friends had begun to feel more than a sense of friendhip for one another but neither would admit it to one another. After various crazy escapades the two finally admitted thier affection for one another and soon they created a purple egg as a result of their feelings for each other. A few weeks later LJ was hatched from a purple digi egg in an isolated cabin in the Digital World that belonged to Lothar's parents. Mandrake and Lothar went to that spot to find a quiet place for their child to be born. His parents were fascinated by his unique color scheme as well as the fact that he seemed to start life as a virus type variant of Punimon. DIGIMON'S INITIAL EVOLUTION LINE FreshSpecies: Punimon Appearance: Attribute: Virus Family/ies: Nature Spirits Type: Slime Fighting Style: Spits paint bubbles and flees. Abilities: [1 Ability Max] Rainbow Bubble: Spits a bubble of rainbow colored paint. Digivolves To: Tsunomon In-TrainingSpecies: Tsunomon Appearance: Unlike other Tsunomon, he takes on Yaamon's color scheme and has brown eyes. The horn on his head is red. Attribute: Virus Family/ies: Nature Spirits Type: Lesser Fighting Style: Spits paint bubbles and flees. Abilities: [2 Abilities Max] Rainbow Bubble: Spits a bubble of rainbow colored paint. Digivolves From: Punimon Digivolves To: Elecmon RookieSpecies: Elecmon Appearance: Instead of mostly red fur, LJ has purple fur much like an Impmon. The parts of an Elecmon's body that normally would be blue are red instead. He has brown eyes and, like Lothar, is capable of walking fully upright but sometimes still walks on all fours. Attribute: Virus Family/ies: Nature Spirits, Virus Busters, Nightmare Soldiers Type: Beast Fighting Style: Fights with both electricity and fire. Abilities: [4 Abilities Max] Super Thunder Strike: Channels electricity into his quill like tails before shooting at an opponent. Badda Boom: Pale blue flames come up from his quill like tails before they are launched. Taser Strike: Channels energy into his paw before punching. Flaming leg sweep: He sweeps his opponents legs with a flaming kick. Digivolves From: Tsunomon Digivolves To: Leomon X
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Post by Mae on Aug 7, 2020 19:11:32 GMT
Personality is 121/150 words.
Otherwise it looks fine.
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Post by ricochet6-Mandrake on Aug 7, 2020 20:52:37 GMT
All right. I hope those are enough words.
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Post by Mae on Aug 7, 2020 20:54:21 GMT
Alright.
Approved on the stipulation that Mandrake needs to be referred to as Daddrake for the rest of his natural and unnatural lifespan.
In all seriousness, though, 1/2.
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Post by Amelie on Aug 7, 2020 22:36:58 GMT
Approved.
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Post by ricochet6-Mandrake on Aug 11, 2020 8:07:41 GMT
Would like to add these two moves to Wizardmon from my purchased RAM UPGRADES.
[RAM UPGRADE] Precognitive Vision: On very rare occasions he can see a brief glimpse of the future. The glimpse of the future is of an event a few minutes to a few hours away. Though it can happen while he is awake, it happens more often in his sleep. The visions never occur during battle though. (Non combat passive) [RAM UPGRADE] Hypnotic Suggestion: He locks eyes with his target before waving a hand to mesmerize someone. The hand wave is for show and isn't really necessary. The one affected is under the influence of this hypnotic power for one post. Cooldown of two posts. And this move for his Mistymon form.
[RAM UPGRADE] Aura Blade: A pale blue aura comes from his sword before he shoots the energy at his opponent. I would like to add Mandrake's and Lothar's mega forms. Mandrake's mega MegaSpecies: MedievalDukemon Appearance: He has sapphire blue eyes and wears his scarf from his rookie form of Impmon around his wrist. Attribute: Data Family/ies:Virus Busters Type: Warrior Fighting Style: Uses a mix of long and short range magical attacks. Abilities: [9 Abilities Max] Rage of Wyvern: Launches a magical energy burst that takes the shape of a wyvern from his weapon. Final Crest: Charges his weapon with magical energy before he slashes at his opponent. Magical Game: Creates illusions with no offensive presence. The illusions lasts for two posts unless they are hit. When the illusions are hit they vanish.(Cooldown of two posts) Mystic Charm: Allows him to transport himself and another up to 25ft. away. Clouded Darkness: Renders himself invisible for two posts. If he is hit while invisible he reappears. Though he reappears if he attacks he never does while invisible.(Cooldown of two posts) Purifying Light: Heals wounds to himself or another.(Cooldown of two posts) [Ram Upgrade Giga] Astral Projection: His astral form leaves his body and can travel up to 10ft. away. In his astral form he can pass through solid objects and cannot be seen. Though he cannot use his telekinesis, he can still communicate telepathically. However, his body is vulnerable to attack in while his astral form is outside his body. Lasts two posts. Two post cooldown(Passive Ability) Here is Lothar's mega. MegaSpecies:SaberLeomon Appearance: Unlike other SaberLeomon, Lothar has brown eyes. Attribute: Data Family/ies: Nature Spirits Type: Ancient Animal Fighting Style: Attacks with both long and short range moves. Abilities: [9 Abilities Max] Howling Crusher: His claws glow with a pale blue aura before he slashes sending a claw shaped burst at the opponent. Aura Needle: His fur begins to glow pale blue before a rain of needle like projectiles made of that aura come raining down on any opponent in a 20ft. radius.(Cooldown of two posts) Twin Fang: His fangs glow before he tries to bite his opponent with his large canines. Crushing Swipe: Swings his powerful front paws in an attempt to strike an opponent. Aura Whip: His tail glows with a pale blue aura before he swings it like a whip. Beastly Strength: Has great physical strength and endurance for a mercenary of his level(Passive ability) Digivolves From:GrapLeomon
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Post by Maia on Sept 13, 2020 0:58:37 GMT
Please change Hypnotic Suggestion to a duration of one post.
Also, I'm sorry for this, there was a small error in prior approval of Clouded Darkness. Would you please add "if he attacks or if he is hit" to reasons the invisibility breaks?
Thank you!
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Post by ricochet6-Mandrake on Sept 13, 2020 1:05:50 GMT
Made the edits to include that he never attacks while invisible. Changed Hypnotic Suggestion to last one post.
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Post by Maia on Sept 13, 2020 1:16:20 GMT
Thanks so much! 1/2!
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Post by Amelie on Sept 13, 2020 1:17:12 GMT
Approved.
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Post by ricochet6-Mandrake on Oct 2, 2020 2:29:26 GMT
Got a small edit needed. Could you add a Toolkit to Lothar's inventory section please
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Post by Maia on Oct 4, 2020 23:30:02 GMT
Done.
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Post by ricochet6-Mandrake on Oct 19, 2020 0:10:45 GMT
One more small edit please. Could Winter Clothes be added to Mandrake's, Lothar's, and LJ's inventory sections please.
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