Nanami Hanabana
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Post by Nanami Hanabana on Aug 9, 2022 6:48:33 GMT
Okey-dokey! Grading time!
First off, your format, while neat-looking, is completely unreadable for mobile users. That can be something of an issue you might want to fix seeing as we have a good few mobile posters here.
Vitabolt - Remove the "Any wound of Rookie-level or lower the target received is healed." blurb. A 2-cd move will generally only heal away a 1-cd move of the same level.
Vitapulse - Make similar adjustments to this ability as well. Also the biocharge is doing way too much. Pick either attack or speed, but not both.
Plasma Pummel - Biocharge is way too strong here. Tripling the move's damage is a bit too much for just 1 additional cooldown. Lower the power boost so that's it's not even doubling.
Static Storm - Also doing a bit too much. It's also essentially tripling the damage. Unless this move's regular damage is intentionally weaker than average, then this move needs to get nerfed.
Overall, it feels as if you're trying to do too much with the biocharge gimmick, considering how easily the stacks are gained.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 11, 2022 20:36:44 GMT
Pog thanks for taking the time to review my application. After some thought, I've decided this site isn't the best fit for me.
Sorry to have wasted your time and I wish you guys the best.
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