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Makiko Domeki, Xros General
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Post by Domeki, Makiko on Jul 26, 2022 23:15:54 GMT
Name: Domeki, Makiko Alias: Maki, miss hundred eyes. Age: 17 Gender: Female Height: 152.4cm (5’3”) Weight: 54.0kg (120lbs) Alignment: Harmoniously Wrathful Birth Date: March 5th Western Horoscope: Pisces Birth Place: Shirakawa, Gifu Prefecture, Nihon/Japan Skills/Talents: Cooking, Laundry, Dishes, speed reading, and being in the wrong place at the wrong time. Backpack Contents: - Hair brush
- Mirror
- Diary
- Collection of Pens
- Books for School
- An Apron
Digivice: Xros Loader, Nightmare Soldier Purple with Metal Empire Silver and Dragon's Roar Red accents Personality: A peaceful girl with a wrathful smile. She has a simple love of reading, and doing housework, and mostly not having her day ruined. This is sadly dismissed by her inopportune issue of being in the wrong place at the wrong time. She usually ends up looking like someone who is trying to hide a much more malicious thought behind her eyes often, and this can make her come off as conniving or even mischievous when instead her mind is kept simple.
She may have a hint of eighth grade syndrome, due to an intense love of gothic novels. Her partners tend to be named much in a way inspired by those novels, and similar manner. The Xros forms are also likely to use this, as the names together may become what she calls the forms. She is not the most creative though, so most of the forms will likely be inspired by other digimon, though she might come up with an occasional interesting form just in the moment.
She is largely uninterested in romance, but would not be distracted from it if someone were to capture her heart. Though be careful of her, as she does have a temper. She is not just a simple flower, for she does have thorns.
When she learns of digimon, she will insist on attempting to seek a way to live in harmony with them, and may end up ignoring the human world for the sake of traveling the digital world and trying to live a life with "Nature". This is due to the fact that she feels the romance of adventure, and a curiosity for what is beyond the door of her home and life that she has not been released upon.
Her fears are rather silly, but she is afraid of her family disappearing on her, and of having her ability to live taken from her by another person. This does not mean she fears death, but instead fears being chained down, or forced to follow the path another sets for her, which may be ironic due to her becoming a Xros General.
She largely identifies her Xros partners as friends and family, even if they do not always have the purest of intentions. She wants them to protect her in the same way that if she had the power to, she would protect them.
Around friends she is the motherly type. She makes sure to take care of those around her, and largely will prevent them from danger if able. Appearance:  A sleepy eyed girl with a decent posture, above average height and weight. She stands a little above the height of her fellow girls in class other than foreigners and those who are truly above average. Her weight is a little higher because of that, but still with in healthy margins. Her eyes are a shocking lilac colored spectacle, with a slight hint of gemstone mixed in. Her hair is a shade of Chinese violet, generally tied behind her with two locks on either side of her head hanging off to the side. Her skin is rather smooth if not for some freckles around her nose that are hard to see unless you are straight up in her face.
Her attire tends to be simple garments, her school uniform for instance. She also has a hobby, or misfortune of being attired in cosplay costumes by those who she goes to school with, so it is not unlikely to see her begrudgingly in outfits like a scientists lab coat, or a maid costume. She will always keep her basic outfit of a blouse under a vest with a medium length pleated skirt. Leggings in cold weather, or an umbrella in the rain. A scarf when the snow is flowing and ear muffs to match.
FaceClaim: SHIN MEGAMI TENSEI: DEVIL SURVIVOR • Mari Mochizuki • Makiko Domeki Personal History: Born in a sleepy little village in gifu prefecture, was a girl whose family name is based upon a yokai of many eyes over the body. Her family were of the quiet sorts, just seeking to make ends meet, and to handle life as it arrived. Her family was rather small for direct, being three or four people, but living with her family back then included her mother's family, her father's family, and then her direct family. This meant that the house was filled with people at all times for a bit, and that meant everyone had to lean into learning how to handle the chores. Or at least that is what her mother tells her from time to time, as they had moved to Odaiba when she turned two, in order to try to focus more on raising her, and it had also been a change of pace for her father who acquired a new job.
She grew up with stories like the above, her mother being mostly stay at home, with minor jobs using the computer or doing errands for others. Her father worked in a construction crew. She would go to school, and spend a decent amount of time trying to not be a burden. When she turned ten, she started taking over chores at home from her mother, so that her mother could focus on bringing more money into the home. This lead her to picking up skills like cooking and cleaning. When she had school work to focus on, she prioritized Japanese, English, and Home Economics. The first two was for her one hobby of reading, and the latter was so that she could provide better food at home and learn little tricks of the trade for cleaning.
When she was fifteen, she was asked out. She immediately rejected it on the basis that she had no interest. When hassled about it, she also mentioned that she preferred to prioritize her family, and that a lover would take her time from that. When the hapless boy continued to push, she finally slapped him across the face, and in doing so almost knocked him off the rooftop. She got suspended for a week.
On her sixteenth birthday, she started hearing a voice call to her, and in her dreams, seeing an area covered in darkness and metal, with halloween like figures, and metallic creatures moving about. An odd glow would come from her phone from time to time, disappearing before she could find out what it was.
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Post by Domeki, Makiko on Jul 26, 2022 23:16:57 GMT
XROS PARTNER LIST Partner Name: Grimm Gender: Male Alignment: Wrathful Skills/Talents: Inventory: (Optional) Personality: Grimm is a Grimmon, who comes from the dark area, and is more like a bladed shield than a predatory creature. He comes off as rather stiff in conversation, and prefers to be supportive of the other partners, than to lead the charge. He is rather proud of the digizoid that makes up his body, and the fact that he is the first partner. He sees Makiko as someone who he wants to mold with his support into a stronger general, one who might help him find a better form for himself. He loves that the nickname she gave him is just his species name minus mon, and that she relies on him the most in xroses.
When inevitably he evolves into Skullgreymon, he becomes more aggressive, with a full body, he wants to use to shield everyone else, but loses sight of it with the need to rip, tear and destroy any opponent that is in front of him. He grows more expressive in this form as well. Personal History: Grimm hatched originally as a Sunamon, who sought to harden his skin. A slime made of sand that found the darkness of the dark area to be the best place to hide, and gather materials. After a time of being in the dark area seeking items for consumption to up its durability, it evolved into Goromon, for which it becomes a more ravenous and mineral hungry creature until finally it felt full.
It then took to traveling the deserts of the dark area, until it found its way to evolve into Sunarizamon, for which it finally acquired more to its ambition. It wanted something more to itself than to evolve into a Demon Lord, or to become some sort of minion. No, Grimm wanted to become a strong individual, that could stand as part of a powerful composite. It would start training itself, while plotting on how to call for its own help. It started sending off cries for destiny and fate into the ether of the dark ocean, while it eventually made some companions.
These companions were an Agumon Black X, and an Arkadimon Child. These would later become known as Loche and Saber respectively, but they became training companions, and someone that Grimm would seek as allies and possibly friends, who he could share a dream with.
When the call was finally answered was the day that these three found the power to evolve further, becoming Grimmon, DarkTyranomon X, and MadLeomon. They knew that soon their general would arrive, even with their power being lower than average for their species, they knew that with this General, that they would find strength. Primary PartnerSpecies: Grimmon Appearance: Grimm looks similar to most of the species that he happens to match up with. Minor differences abound though as he has glowing red eyes, as opposed to the darker color that usually hides with in his skull like face. The main of hair is a purplish color as opposed to being blonde, and the wings share the color of the eyes, a shocking scarlet color. The body otherwise is lighter, being a bit more akin to chrome digizoid as opposed to being darker in color. The Scythe on his left arm has a thicker blade near the center, before breaking off into a smaller back edge and a longer, more wicked forward axe head. Finally, his tail spike is more pronounced, almost like a knife style blade to match his claws and scythe arm. Attribute: Virus Family/ies: Metal Empires, Nightmare Soldiers Type: Demon Dragon Fighting Style: Aggressive support, using the armor to protect allies while striking at the enemy in retaliation, attempting to lock down and hinder. Abilities: - [Passive] Chrome Digizoid: A super-metal that grows stronger the more it is tempered. It may give further benefits than just defense. For now just Twenty percent defense increase.
- [Passive] Reaper: On a physical attack, can pierce with a three turn cool down.
- [Active] Arm Scythe: A strike with the scythe on the Left arm.
- [Active] Rozen Shield: Four post cool down, used to block and counter strikes from opponents.(1 attack blocked, with minor strike counter attack)
Digivolves To: MetalTyranomonX Xros(Xros2), GrimmLeomon(Xros2), SkullGreymon(?)(Super Evolution), Primary Partner - Super Evolution
Species: SkullGreymon(X/Xros) Appearance: Grimm in Skullgreymon form though is rather different. Do not get me wrong, he still has the bio core, and the skeletal figure, that has not changed. What has is that his body is made of Obsidian Digizoid, his head is shaped like an elongated form of Grimmon's head for the top, with the skullgreymon lower jaw, while mainting the purple hair from the back of it. The skeletal fingers and toes are tipped with metallic blades, and the wings are phantasmically filled in with a similar glow to Grimmon's wings. The missile still sits behind it, though it has a more pronounced draconic face, with a metallic nose. Its eyes glow in Grim's Scarlet shade. Attribute: Virus Family/ies: Dragons Roar, Metal Empires, Nightmare Soldiers Type: Undead Skeletal Dragon Fighting Style: Unlike child/adult stage, becomes more aggressive, striking with long limbs and firing the missile from its back over and over in a rather feral attempt to wipe the enemy out. Abilities: - [Passive] Obsidian Digizoid:
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Digivolves From: Grimmon Partner Name: Loche Gender: Male Alignment: Moral Skills/Talents: Inventory: (Optional) Personality: Loche's personality is like that of a team leader. If Makiko is the General, then Grimm would be the Major, and Loche would be the Captain, ready to lead the rest under their guidance. He takes care of his allies, and that is why he puts himself into the fray, and fights on the front line under barrage from the enemies. He also would likely be the one to listen to the other's woes, and try to help them through it. Do not take him for soft hearted though, as he is just as vicious as any X-antibody virus out there, but he cares deeply for his friends and allies. One could make the joke that he would be the hero of a party using friendship as a battle cry. Of the three, he is rather optimistic, which is unusual in a virus type who was raised in the dark area. He is not the primary partner of the general, but he is the closest to her in manners of confidence, which may be why he is the partner who finds himself in a majority of xroses, only being in less than Grimm himself.
Personal History: Loche evolved from a fufumon who had been born unceremoniously in the dark area. It luckily had the fortune of being a type that could hide easily, and be adopted by similar style digimon. Upon evolution, it became Kyokyomon and then during a fight between its adopted group, and another more fierce digimon, it evolved into Black Agumon X, influenced by its innate X-antibody, and the dark nature of the area it was born in. It would then start wondering the dark area, trying to find a new family to partake with. Eventually it would come across two individuals who would become known as Grimm and Saber, and decide that they would be his new family. He only had to wait for their general to arrive. Second PartnerSpecies: Dark Tyranomon X Appearance: Loche is a Tyrannosaurus style digimon with Black skin, and blue markings along his body. The blue markings also spread to his spikes, in a glowing way. The spines on his body are usually shooting off blue fire in an eerie glow. His claws are metallic chrome colored, and the wrappings are a bluish leather cloth. His feet are clawed similarly to his hands, with enhanced metallic implements. Attribute: Virus Family/ies: Nightmare Soldiers, Unknown, Dragon's Roar Type: Dinosaur Fighting Style: Main Combatant, prefers to duel his opponent if able, or to fight alongside his teammates to strike great blows to the opponent with a hope of being the main focus for the enemy. Abilities: - [Passive] X-Antibody: The X-antibody in Loche cools his temper, but flares his weaponry. He is ten percent tougher and twenty percent stronger.
- [Passive] Blue Flames: When Loche hits a target, his flames flare up, attempting to draw attention to him in challenge to those enemies who are close to him. These phantasmal flames entice and mesmerizes foes who see these bright flames, making it so that they would likely turn towards him during it, drawing attacks closer to him in response. These flames take a little bit of aggression to get flaring, and shine only so brightly once ever few strikes. Lasts for two posts with a three post cool down.
- [Active] X-claw: One turn cool down, Loche strikes out with his claws at the opponent, dealing damage in the process should they hit.
- [Active] Sapphire Blast: three post cool down, Loche unleashes a fire breath of blue flames that latch on to the enemies that it hits, these flames then deal minor damage each turn for three turns.
Digivolves To: Metal Tyranomon X(Xros)(With Grimm) Partner Name: Saber Gender: Male Alignment: Wrathful Skills/Talents: Inventory: (Optional) Personality: Saber's persona, well he is rather of few words. This may be because his evolution path so far has been focused only on killing, eating, or feral mindsets. His brain is not as developed as the others, but do not call him stupid. He is still cunning, just lacking in the more formative intelligence. He usually will speak with only a single word at a time to express his opinion. His battle style though proves his intellect more than his words, as he shows by striking at weak points and trying to take down the opponent most enabling the enemies. Otherwise he is a rather quiet, almost meditative creature, who is likely trying to figure out his place in this world, as an undead berserk lion. He sees his general as a master of sorts, that she will help develop him into a more powerful being to suit the needs of his two friends, with the hope that she may be able to unleash a potential that he has not seen so far, not that he can even say so.
Personal History: Saber for his sake, was born as a Kuramon. Unlike the other two, he was born artificially, created by bugs in the system, and born as a rather odd nature. He ate the data around him to evolve, and that data was mostly left over bits of a creature he followed. He travelled from area to area, following this creature, keeping to its shadow. Evolving into Arkadimon and latching on to its provider. Not that the big lug knew what it was helping, nor that it had been latched onto and was being leached. It just so happens that its host was the one who fought Loche's family, and in the fight faced mutual destruction, during which Saber would evolve into the Bewitching Beast Arkadimon, and would start trailing the survivor. More apt now, Saber would start hunting on his own, seeking his own fights, and eventually lose sight of the small black dinosaur.
When next he would face them, his intelligence would have evolved enough to be able to properly communicate, and upon meeting the two outsiders, he would find kinship, even in his broken mannerisms. He knows that the one who will help guide his evolution further will arrive soon, and that it will fulfill the other two in a way he does not understand, but wants to see. Third PartnerSpecies: MadLeomon Appearance: Saber stands tall with bone like protrusions, being the most stereotypical of his species. Purple Skinned undead leomon, bones jutting out rather feral looking body. Where he does differ is his crimson leather instead of black for his wrappings and leggings. His Mane matches, being a crimson color as well. Attribute: Virus, Free, None Family/ies: Nightmare Soldiers Type: Undead Fighting Style: Hit and run flanker. Prefers to engage targets in a way that allows him to get hits from their blind spots if able, or to overwhelm with strength and speed. Abilities: - [Passive] Rot Poison: When Saber has not been targeted by an attack, boost damage by thirty percent for the next attack that Saber hits with.
- [Passive] Grave Walk: Every three posts, Saber is able to boost his movement and agility enough to either strike from another angle or to get away from those targeting him.
- [Active] Zombeast strike: Saber strikes out with claws and fangs, attempting to hit the opponent. Just a basic attack, zero post cool down.
- [Active] Wrath of the Lion Shade: three post cool down, saber puts his all into a strike infused with the shadows and poison with in his body the prevailing claw attack takes the form of a shadowy lion head that strikes through the opponent.(Does not pierce, just hits hard)
Digivolves To: GrimmLeomon(With Grimm) Partner Name: ? Gender: Alignment: Skills/Talents: Inventory: (Optional) Personality: Personal History: (Optional) Fourth PartnerSpecies: Appearance: Attribute: Family/ies: Type: Fighting Style: Abilities: - [Passive]
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Digivolves To: Partner Name: ? Gender: Alignment: Skills/Talents: Inventory: (Optional) Personality: Personal History: (Optional) Fifth PartnerSpecies: Appearance: Attribute: Family/ies: Type: Fighting Style: Abilities: - [Passive]
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Digivolves To: Partner Name: ? Gender: Alignment: Skills/Talents: Inventory: (Optional) Personality: Personal History: (Optional) Higher Power PartnerSpecies: Appearance: Attribute: Family/ies: Type: Fighting Style: Abilities: - [Passive]
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Post by Domeki, Makiko on Jul 26, 2022 23:18:01 GMT
XROS FORM LIST Xros Level X2Species: Metal Tyrannomon X(Xros) Appearance: The black and blue body of Loche with attributes of Grimm strewn through it. The upper part of Grimm's head is an integrated mask for the Dark Tyranomon. The clawed hands are further augmented by larger scything claws, and cannon palms, allowing for both styles from the same area. The spine is augmented by the metallic spine of Grimm, with the wings covering the body as rib like armor. The tail has fused into a flaming sword at the tip. A Phantasmal blue flame comes out of various ports, and the eyes glow a ghastly purple. Attribute: Virus Family/ies: Metal Empire, Dragons Roar, Nightmare Soldier Type: Cyborg Fighting Style: Tank and lead fighter. Being both Grimm and Loche, this xros relies on soaking up the enemies attention and hits for his allies, while retaliating with counter strikes and heavy hits. Abilities: - [Passive] X-Antibody: The X-antibody in Loche cools his temper, but flares his weaponry. He is ten percent tougher and twenty percent stronger.
- [Passive] Chrome Digizoid: A super-metal that grows stronger the more it is tempered. It may give further benefits than just defense. For now just Twenty percent defense increase.
- [Passive] Blue Flames: When Grimm-Loche hits a target, his flames flare up, attempting to draw attention to him in challenge to those enemies who are close to him. These phantasmal flames entice and mesmerizes foes who see these bright flames, making it so that they would likely turn towards him during it, drawing attacks closer to him in response. These flames take a little bit of aggression to get flaring, and shine only so brightly once ever few strikes. Lasts for two posts with a three post cool down.
- [Active] Anchor Claws: Two post Cool down. This attach sends out the claws on Grim-Loches arms into the nearby opponents, attempting to drag them closer by piercing into them. Pierces and does medium damage.
- [Active] Sapphira Laser: A blue laser made of focused heat shoots out from one or both arms into the enemy, dealing minor minor damage and with a cool down able to cause DOT. One post cool down with out DOT, or three with.
- [Active] Sapphira Shield: Four post cool down shield, creating a blue shield all around the body of Grimm-Loche, protecting nearby allies as well as himself from the strikes of enemies with a vacuum drawing in enemy attacks, though will break against the attack of a higher tier enemy.(IE If one of Perfect/Ultimate level strikes, the shield gets destroyed.) Grimm-Loche cannot move during this move, regardless of if the shield stays or not.
Xros Components: Grimmon+Dark Tyrannomon X Xros Level X2Species: GrimmLeomon Appearance: In this xros, Saber is the main body.The Mad Leomon body becomes augmented by the Grimmon's body in several ways. Starting from the head, the Grimmon face mask covers Saber's face, but in a skull mask style, with the face taking on a darker color. Going to the main, it becomes hood like, with the bones and the mixed hair of crimson and purple making for a hood that covers the head other than the mask, with the ears having small slits for it. The chests bony outcropping becomes mixed with the armor of the Grimmon, forming a chest piece with shoulder pads, though bones still protrude from that. The lower body is left largely untouched. the armor covers the back though. For a weapon, Grim's arms and tail fuse into a large scythe with a glowing "Eye" made from the cannon working as a centerpiece to hold the blade to the new handle. Attribute: Virus, Free, None Family/ies: Nightmare Soldier, Metal Empire Type: Undead Demon Beast Fighting Style: Being a mix of Grimm and Saber, this hit and run fighter now focuses on striking fear and extra hits with the scythes blade into the enemies, while diverting attention for allies to get extra hits in. Abilities: - [Passive] Rot Poison: When Saber has not been targeted by an attack, boost damage by thirty percent for the next attack that Saber hits with.
- [Passive] Grave Walk: Every three posts, Saber is able to boost his movement and agility enough to either strike from another angle or to get away from those targeting him.
- [Passive] Reaper: On a physical attack, can pierce with a three turn cool down.
- [Active] Grimm-reaper: Two post cool down bouncing attack that has Saber launch the scythe part of the Xros at an enemy, causing it to spin and strike up to two enemies, bouncing once between them before returning to Saber's hand. Two post cool down.
- [Active] LeoShade strike: Zero post cool down attack that strikes using the off hand, fangs and kicks. Does minor damage, and mostly used during the other two attacks cool downs.
- [Active] Phantom of Nemea: Three post cool down, Grimm-saber puts all of the combined power of the xros combination together to create a greater form of the scythe with a phantasm lion skull appearing on the back edge of the scythe, leaking venom and striking into the opponent twice in an X shape. Once used, Grimm-Reaper also goes on cool down.
Xros Components: Grimmon+Mad Leomon Xros Level X2Species: Appearance: Attribute: Family/ies: Type: Fighting Style: Abilities: - [Passive]
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Xros Components: (3 Digimon) Xros Level X3Species: Appearance: Attribute: Family/ies: Type: Fighting Style: Abilities: - [Passive]
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Xros Components: (3 Digimon) Xros Level X4Species: Appearance: Attribute: Family/ies: Type: Fighting Style: Abilities: - [Passive]
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Xros Components: (4 Digimon) Xros Level X4Species: Appearance: Attribute: Family/ies: Type: Fighting Style: Abilities: - [Passive]
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Xros Components: (4 Digimon) Xros Level X5 / Xros Level X7Species: Appearance: Attribute: Family/ies: Type: Fighting Style: Abilities: - [Passive]
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Post by Domeki, Makiko on Jul 26, 2022 23:19:04 GMT
OPTIONAL EVOLUTIONARY STAGES - ARMOR DIGIVOLUTION Xros Level X2 - IncompleteSpecies: Appearance:
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Digivolves From: : Xros Level X3 - IncompleteSpecies: Appearance:
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Digivolves From: OPTIONAL EVOLUTIONARY STAGES - DNA DIGIVOLUTION DNA UltimateSpecies: Appearance:
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Digivolves From: OPTIONAL EVOLUTIONARY STAGES - MODE CHANGES Xros Level X4 ChangeSpecies: Appearance:
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Digivolves From: Digivolves To: Xros Level X5 Mode Change / Xros Level X7 Mode ChangeSpecies: Appearance:
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Post by arissey on Aug 24, 2022 11:00:41 GMT
Loche's Personality section is 21 words shy of the required 150 word description
Saber's Personality is 24 words shy.
Neither of these are mandatory just yet since you won't have access to them until you reach Champion rank at 75 posts, so you don't have to expand upon them right now if you don't want to. And of course, it's fine if you'd like to do so right here.
Now onto the movesets!
Loche
Blue Flames - Little bit of an issue here. What specifically is causing the taunt effect? If this attack were to hit me, what would be stopping me from attacking somebody else other than "my passive says you can't"? Abilities that take away player agency can be a little iffy, so it's best to explain how they work so it's easier to understand how they interact with other abilities.
X-Claw - Nothing wrong with this ability, but it apparently says that Saber is the one using this attack?
Metal Tyrannomon X
Blue Flames - Same as the previous version
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Post by Domeki, Makiko on Aug 25, 2022 5:32:40 GMT
The Blue Flame one is more about drawing attention then a full on taunt, basically "Wow, big flame" As opposed to a "Drawing the attack type" That is why it exists on a frame with the shield that vacuum draws. I can try to rewrite it, but could not figure out a better use with it. Basically wanted something to work with the tank motif, while also not being purely another attack option, and wanted something thematic with the form. Will try to figure out a better way to write it out.
I can fix the X-claw one easily, and I will try to boost their personalities in the mean time.
Edit: Fixed X-claw and the Personalities, still trying to figure out what to do with that ability slot, trying to keep the name, but wanting something that would be better.
Edit 2: With some help, came up with a taunt like ability that should be less forced, but also more thematic.
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Post by Domeki, Makiko on Aug 25, 2022 19:01:29 GMT
Edit: Fixed X-claw and the Personalities, still trying to figure out what to do with that ability slot, trying to keep the name, but wanting something that would be better.
Edit 2: With some help, came up with a taunt like ability that should be less forced, but also more thematic.
What the edits say, fixed up the issues, I think. Hope this is more acceptable.
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arissey
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Post by arissey on Aug 26, 2022 5:58:59 GMT
alrighty, then. everything looks good, so this gets a 1/2.
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Amelie
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Post by Amelie on Aug 26, 2022 6:40:18 GMT
Approved.
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