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Post by UFADO on Oct 1, 2014 21:08:59 GMT
Armor Ultimate: swapping
Armor Ultimate: Lucemon Chaos Mode
Appearance:
Attribute: Virus
Family: Nightmare Soldiers
Type: Demon Lord/ Fallen Angel
Attacks: Paradise Lost Punch: Punches the oponent a single time or several times so fast it warps time, ahving the oponent not even be able to move during the punching sequence from the time the first one hits.
Ultimate Sacrifice: Traps the oponent and those phisically close to it within the merging of a light spherical prison and one of darkness, creating a three-dimensional magic circle with alternating symbols of light and darkness for 1 post before it explodes creating a severe amount of damage to anyone caught within it. (2 posts cooldown, usable once per foe)
Orb of Purgatory: Merges a sphere of orderly peacefull light, with a sphere of chaotic phantom darkness, creating a pulsating orb of conflicting souls, whose waves of power started with it's throwing and explosion, disturbs the oponents spirit preventing attacks for 1 post and disturbing focus for 2 posts.(2 posts cooldown)
Hazard Cross: The digital hazard symbol on her hands turns red and Lucemon Chaos mode fires ten super-heated red balls of pure energy organised in a cruciform ahead of a single red beam of energy. When the attack hits an oponent, will usually cause some pretty harsh damage, but when it hits environment can destroy a large amount of terrain, or structures.
Revelations: Darkness is irradiated from within, creating speed boost and a slight power boost for Lucemon Chaos Mode for 2 posts. Can remove that speed to instead throw a wave of fear which increases the negative feelings his enemies have for each other,for two posts, possibly having them turn on each other. (2 posts cooldown) Mega mode change (not yet purchased): Appearance: 
Mega Mode Change: BlackWarGreymon
Attribute:Virus
Family/ies: Nightmare Soldiers
Type: Demon Warrior
Attacks: Tera Destroyer- Gathers Negative energy around him and forms a giant ball of it between his hands, which is then hurled at the oponent, causing a massive explosion.
Dark Breaker- Infuses his body with an aura of darkness and rushs against the enemy.
Great Slayer- Extends his claws into a massive size and cuts throught the enemy
Nightmare Rush- Creates several Copies of himself made out of Darkness and they all fight the enemy. Copies can only use the "Great Slayer" attack and last for 4 posts. (3 posts cooldown). Copies are mindless except for the taken orders and despite their speed and firpower being no different from the original they're individual attacks can be easily dodged. Copies are also more vulnerable to chance effects they can surive getting by up to 3 attacks.
Anti-Shield- Grabs the shield on his back and creates a ball of dark energy as the enemy attacks hit the shield, over the course of 2 posts. This ball of dark energy is then thrown at the enemy and explodes upon contact. (4 posts cooldown) Dark Tornado: Puts his hands together up in the air and spins extremly fast, creating a black tornado, pulling his enemies into it and holding them there as they are damaged by the tornado. The tornado lasts two posts. (1 post cooldown) Dramon Destroyer: Claws the enemy several times extremly rapidly. The adrenaline of this stack will cause any stun, poison, blinding effects or others similar to those to leave Blackwargreymon, but if any is removed, this attack will have a three post cooldown. |
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Post by ♛SuperMeip ヌƵ on Oct 2, 2014 16:30:20 GMT
For BlackWarGreymon:
+ It still says armor ultimate in front of their name.
+If you haven't purchased mega mode change yet please make sure you state that
+Nightmare Rush: Copies must be weaker than the original
For Lucemon Chaos Mode:
+Paradise lost punch: What do you mean warp time? Explain
+Orb of purgatory: How does it effect the foe? Is it thrown?
+Revelations: Nope sorry, cant' get more attacks like this.
Fix that to start off
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Post by UFADO on Oct 2, 2014 16:56:25 GMT
Edited
As for Paradise lost punch, the time warp thing is on one hand a cosmetic thing, like instead of going faster everything else goes slower, and on the other hand is to state just about how fast the attack is. Also added a small detail there which I think helps explain the idea of how I visualize the attack.
The Orb of Purgatory attack. In there the orb just keeps pulsating in Lucemon's hand(s) until the effect expires. |
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Post by ♛SuperMeip ヌƵ on Oct 4, 2014 17:30:47 GMT
Oh for purgatory orb that's a no then, cause that sorta mean's it's instahit and we can't have that, especially on something that disables foes.
Also
Revalations: "creating slower boost " Not exactly sure what you're saying here but the second part is a no, it's mind control. The energy can increase negative feelings or something but it can't make someone do something outright.
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Post by UFADO on Oct 4, 2014 17:42:23 GMT
fixed
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Post by UFADO on Oct 5, 2014 9:11:23 GMT
*BUMP*
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Post by ♛SuperMeip ヌƵ on Oct 6, 2014 0:07:05 GMT
So it's only been a few hours, don't be ruuude dude wait for edits we aren't robots.
And so orb of purgatory only works if it hits the opponent right?
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Post by UFADO on Oct 6, 2014 17:24:39 GMT
1. Sorry about that. I tagged this thing as "urgent" for a reason(s), but sorry.
2. Yes, only what it hits. That includes what the orb hits and what the explosion that follows hits.
3 Sove pointed out some other stuff I need to add.
So need to add to the skills/ talents section
Inner Scan: UFADO has a slightly improved scanning function installed within him, allowing him to recognise other digimon quickly.
Ultra fast adaptation digital organism: UFADO is provided with small adaptations when he wants them. These adaptations can include a minor to resistance to cold, learning a different language and things as such.
To add to his mega form:
Passive: Weaponry: UFADO's hands, helmet, waist, back and tail can all summon fractal code which will turn into a variable add-on for UFADO, such as wings, blades, drills, horns or cannons. Some will allow UFADO additional movement while others will allow the execution of UFADO's attacks. The blades that emerge from UFADO's hand can combine to make a larger one on just one of his hands.
Self-Data: UFADO has a small regeneration sistem, that allows for a slow regeneration over time.
adding a few notes for UFADO's super-mega:
UFADO's super mega is triggered only by his death, and causes UFADO to lose all control and risk deletion. UFADO is unable to use it without the proper conditions. |
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Post by soveliss on Oct 8, 2014 15:28:31 GMT
Orb of Purgatory needs both a cooldown and a tone down. Locking people out for two posts in a long time.
Hazard Cross: Do each of the balls do damage separately or collectively?
Revelations – cooldown required
Nightmare Rush: Toughness of clones?
Anti-Shield: Does the shield absorb the attacks? Also, auto-breaking defenses is a no-no
Singular Data: Err, this seems like a kind of god-moddy thing. It’s difficult to explain a state where this would be fine, because I can’t think of a balancing mechanism. I certainly wouldn’t allow him have access to it in the current state because it creates some potential issues in the future with meta-gaming. I’ll try and think of fixes, but you might want to think about something different.
Super Virus: Real life hacking is not well represented by media, but the reason this wouldn’t work is that hacking in real life is a very reactive thing. There’s no way to have it as an automatic system because the skills that are applies change regularly. Viruses are designed to exploit a single hole until it’s fixed.
And finally, you don’t get to be stronger than the standard mega or super mega, so both final notes need to go.
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Post by UFADO on Oct 8, 2014 16:09:56 GMT
Edited
Hazard Cross : the balls damage individually, but come in formattion, usually all hitting the same target.
Singular Data: Please note, this ability does prevent UFADO from being killed or defeated. It only prevents him from being destroyed permanently. The reaction triggered by the absorsion of the data is another safety mechanism, and usually won't work on the caharacters of other Rpers, as they will both OOC be aware of this ability and IC they don't usually absorb data from other digimon. Sephi's character even criticized such an action and that's the only opinion on the matter I heard so far. As for NPC's, I'd say corrupted data is fairly easy to recognise, but I may add some details about it to make it easier to recognise. Long Story short: This ability does nothing but allow a creative reason for my character to continue his existance despite many possible defeats and will only harm anyone who actually tries to absorb UFADO despite all the reasons not to do it, both IC and OOC.
Super Virus: I added short explanation and it has to do with UFADO's adaptive nature (his name litterally means "Ultra Fast Adaptation Digital Organism"). Hope I am clear enougth. |
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Post by Darian Soten on Oct 8, 2014 16:33:12 GMT
As a note, my character is my character. A standard good guy who doesn't really believe in the things such as absorbing data and the like. Taking one character's opinion as the way every single RP'er on the site is going to react, is not a good way to base a power as "not OP".
Also, I think everyone who's looked at this has noticed that you're not actually changing things. Just adding more stuff to the end to try and have it approved with even more extra stuff.
PSS: Sove and I are both in school for some sort of computer related thing. We both know enough about hacking to explain why it wouldn't work in an automatic state.
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Post by UFADO on Oct 8, 2014 17:28:54 GMT
1.Sorry, it's just that had been the only opinion I had on the matter thus far.
2. Now that is not true. Yes, in some cases I did just add stuff to end, but that's because I believe(d) that the explanation provided by what was added in end sufficed. However on many things, I'm actually changing, and in some cases just removing.
3. I'll remove the Super Virus thing, but it may turn out to explain IC about 30 posts referencing UFADO having hacked into DATS. |
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Post by Darian Soten on Oct 8, 2014 17:37:47 GMT
UFADO should have never "hacked" DATS in the first place. That's metagaming a whole organization that's ran by Meip. It's not just something that we have on site, but other real users are part of it. Having explicit information on them, with no legitimate way of having it, was metagaming from the beginning.
I ran a Ctrl+F through your original profile for the terms "Hack" "Virus" "Super Virus" and after a parse of it, it came up with nothing. Not even the ability that you're trying to add in now. So where in the world did you get the concept of having all this information because of all these hacking skills that don't even exist in your original profile?
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Post by UFADO on Oct 8, 2014 20:28:58 GMT
To answer your question, UFADO's abilites I'm writing now are being added because I didn't have written them on the original profile, thinking I didn't have to. Sove pointed out that I did had to have them on my profile and so here we are.
But I got your point. I removed the super virus ability. Hope things are better now. |
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Post by soveliss on Oct 8, 2014 22:32:02 GMT
I’m still not happy with the singular data, it creates very awkward situations where the only way around it is to metagame.
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