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Post by Deleted on Nov 26, 2015 22:13:09 GMT
"Come, taste the wine, race the blind They will guide from the light Writing noughts till the end of time..."
NameNakamura, Ren
Age 18
Gender Female
Height 5'7'' (172 cm)
Weight: 132 lb (60 kg)
Alignment Neutral Evil
Birth Date 20th April
Birth Place Kyōto, Kyōto Prefecture, Japan
Western Horoscope Taurus
Eastern Zodiac Metal Snake
Skills/Talents Ren's extremely intelligent and well-read due to her upbringing. She knows at least a piece of relevant information on a wide variety of topics, ranging from to common subjects to less useful or obscure ones. If we eschew her career of choice, the subjects she knows the most about are laws, politics and, strangely enough, acting.
Personality
Ren's first and foremost a cheerful girl with a competitive spirit that would make an Olympic athlete to weep in shame. She firmly believes that taking the path of less resistance is the best way to be successful at life and isn't bound by things such as morals or scruples as long as that helps her reach her objectives.
This doesn't mean that she's lazy or a slacker whose first solution to anything is trying to take advantage of the situation; she knows that the tactic sometimes may be risky or that it just might not be the most elegant solution. Being prepared for everything is what she considers the greatest asset in any situation, and that's why she strives to ignite her potential and become a bit better each day.
Her usual behavior, however, contradicts greatly this mindset; an aura of cheerfulness always surrounds her, pretty much communicating how much she enjoys life and wishes to live it at its fullest.
Regarding her social circle, she isn't particularly close to any of her classmates and isn't close friends with nobody in particular, preferring to have a large circle of acquaintances instead; while extremely responsible and disciplined, she hates to compromise with something in which she doesn't believe fully. That, coupled with a concept of friendship that involves standing for the other no matter what, has left her with doubts on growing closer to somebody; not to the point of purposely avoiding social circles or anything of the like, but neither actively seeking them.
Appearance
How she extrapolates her looks into her everyday life is quite easy to appreciate; her steps are steady and sure (when she's not tripping), and her piercing gaze transmits her unyielding confidence and calm. Accompanying that, a polite smile and a cheerful expression is what you will usually see on her face, maybe even displaying a wee bit of mischievousness every now and then.
Regarding the clothes she wears, she prefers to dress comfortably rather than fashionably, but if she can mix both, that's way better. Other than that, she has no clear preference on colors or styles, choosing whatever catches her eyes at the moment.
As a last note, she always carries a black scrunchy on her left wrist, almost as if it were a bracelet of sorts. More than a fashion statement, it's if she needs to tie her hair up for whatever reason; one never knows when you might need it.
Personal History Ren's the only child of a wealthy, yet traditional Japanese family. Since she was young, she had been ingrained in the values of hard work and community and how that made someone successful, that being one of the cornerstone of all her childhood and her early teens.
Regrettably, life isn't as easy as it seems, and age sure loves to you that fact in the most bitter way. When someone undeserving of something ends up being above you due to favors owed and not due his or her own merit invariably changes someone, whether to the better or the worse.
In this particular case, it had been something of a revelation; while the default comment towards that specific situation had been to turn the other cheek or to ignore something that had been accomplished on a way that wasn't right, nothing had changed, no heavenly judgment had fallen to the offender... nothing at all.
And that made Ren think; she was smarter and more skilled than the girl who had usurped her place and the edge she had had been only something dubbed as an unfair advantage. What would've happened if the playing field had been leveled, or better yet, if they had changed places? It'd had been a victory in all and every sense.
After that realization, it was pretty hard to look back, especially when everything just became both easier and more rewarding while the repercussions were pretty much nonexistent.
Barring this, her childhood and adolescence resulted in one of relative normalcy all the way to university, where she is currently studying medicine in hopes of becoming a psychiatrist.
Backpack Contents
Backpacks are too cumbersome. Ren carries her wallet in one of the pockets of her skirt/jeans and not much else. Like any university student, she usually carries her books and notebooks on her hands.
Digivice
White body, yellow grips D-3 and a standard issue D-Terminal.
ORIGINAL ART • ??? • Nakamura, Ren (courtesy of Google. Author's name is not mentioned in the piece) |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 27, 2015 20:30:36 GMT
Partner's Name Rin
Default Form Highest attained
Gender Female
Alignment Lawful Evil
Skills/Talents
AdjudicatorGiven Rin's particular way of seeing things (see My Point of View), she capable of sensing the alignment of any beings nearby her. My Point of ViewEven if blind by choice, that doesn't mean that Rin can't see; instead, she resorts to a sixth-sense of sorts, not unlike a snake's ability to sense thermal radiation. Instead of sensing heat signals, however, she sees a colored spectrum depending on the character in question's alignment, working in conjunction with the aforementioned skill, Adjudicator. (Here are the colors). UnmovableGiven the relatively heavy armor that Rin carries on all her stages from rookie onward and the way her body has adapted to it, she comes off as an extremely durable digimon, even if that's at the cost of her speed being below your average, everyday mon.
PersonalityRin believes herself to be some sort of heavenly arbiter. She thinks that her life's work is to create the definitive book of law; a document that'll bring order and pace to the world and, of course, to enforce it. What good are laws if they aren't obeyed, after all? Above everything, anything she does is related to this goal in some way.
Despite how lofty that objective is, she is a pragmatic digimon to the core. A being that's capable of fighting in both the battlefield and when sharing her ideas and ideals with resolution; how charismatic she is and her chances of anybody else becoming a supporter of her cause is something questionable at best, but she doesn't mind it as long as every word she exposes is coated with cold and carefully thought logic. If they don't want to partake into such an important endeavor even when given the reasons, it's their fault, not hers.
Her presence usually irradiates an aura of cold calm and her usual expression is a solemn face, even if those sporadically change depending on the situation; seeing her on a joyful mood is rare, but quite the sight to behold.
All in all, even if she may come off with an almost bothersome businesslike attitude, she shows a genuine amount of joy at exchanging ideas with others, and given an insatiable need to learn something new everyday, has an innate curiosity of what motivates others. She has a short temper for overly idealistic and emotional speeches (or any kind of anything above reason spiel), though.
DIGIMON'S INITIAL EVOLUTION LINE
Attribute None
Family None
Type
Slime
AttacksPuppy Eyes: Stares at the depths of somebody's soul with an expression that can only be described as utterly heart-wrenching and would make every puss in boots in existence to reevaluate their life choices. Would you really kick the dog? Are you that heartless?
Digivolves To
Culumon
Attribute Unknown
Family None
Type Holy Beast
Attacks
Cute Face: See puppy eyes, but instead of a puppy-shaped blob you have a huggable plushie. Equally mean to attack her, wouldn't you think?
Fireworks: Makes a colorful show of harmless lights. No real use besides a distraction, potentially blinding someone temporarily if they're too close/are sensitive to bright light or parties.
Digivolves To
Elaiomon
Rookie Elaiomon
Appearance Elaiomon appears as a shortish, young human female, barely stranding above 4'11''. Her short body, however, isn't devoid of the potency or vitality; while not exactly muscular, her appearance isn't the one of a wimp. To emphasize this, she's always standing tall and proud, a determined expression being the her first and most striking feature when gazing at her. Regarding her physiognomy and setting the aforementioned fact aside, she'd look pretty much like an ten, maybe an eleven year old girl; a silky mane of chocolate hair that descends freely through and reaches little further than middle of her back, despite the apparent negligence that Rin seems to have with the more girlish aspects of her body. The darkness of her hair is contrasted by her smooth, alabaster-white and unmarred skin, making a sort of contrast between the militaristic visage she wants to give and looking like a small girl, that fact bothering her a bit.
Her usual attire, is the one you would expect from an ancient Greek soldier and not from a small girl; what seems to be a tailor-made heavy armor that looks like a slightly more ornate replica of a hoplite's are what she usually wears; her weapons of choice are an aspis that's probably as half as big as her body and rather heavy, but that she carries as if it were as light as a feature and a scale that always seems to be balanced, at least when she's holding it. As a last note, her helmet-less face can be described as quite pretty, even if her eyes are always covered by a brown piece of cloth.
Attribute Free
Family Nature Spirits
Type God Man
Prowess: Each time Rin receives an attack, she gains knowledge on how said attack exactly works.
Attacks
Bulwark: Adopting a defensive stance, Rin greatly increases her defensive abilities at the cost of her attacks becoming slightly weaker. Lasts 3 posts.
Culling Scales: Sand begins to overflow from Rin's scales, blowing around and damaging anyone else who comes in contact with them. This ability deals damage directly proportional to the time Rin has spent inside of combat; starting off as practically harmless and picking up power until the seven consecutive round she's been in combat. Its damage becomes moderate by the third or fourth round and severe by the seventh.
Shield Bash: Rin gains a temporary burst of speed and dashes towards an enemy before hitting them with her shield. Deals a moderate amount of damage and dazes the enemy, greatly reduces the damage dealt by the target's next successful ability if this attack hits. The same enemy may be effect by this effect more than once.
Digivolves To
Astaphamon
Champion Astaphamon
Appearance Astaphamon's a more mature take on Elaionmon, fittingly being her adult form. Now standing 5'4'', she resembles the direction that said human female's body would've taken in two-ish years; her hair is slightly longer as a result and her body seems to have gone through a tough training regime, becoming both stronger, nimbler and more durable. Her armor has also "evolved" with her body, so to say; even heavier and more ornate than before, it's bound to at least earn her some looks of curiosity due to the beginnings of what seems an intricate scene of a trial. On the same line, her weapons have also risen to the occasion; both are now bigger, heavier, more elaborate, stronger and more potent in their uses, making Astaphamon a formidable combatant.
Of course, there are things that hadn't changed, despite this evolution; Rin's expression and posture still carry the same amount of solemness and determination and, just as always, the brown piece of cloth that covered her eyes before still faithfully fulfills her duty; it looks a bit battered and worse for the wear, but Rin doesn't mind that, given that for her it signifies what she had to go through in order to attain her current form.
Attribute Free
Family Nature Spirits
Type God Man
Impetus: While in combat, each passing round slightly increases Rin's offensive and defensive power, making her stronger the longer she fights and capping in the tenth post. The benefits are negligible on the first two rounds, become moderate by the fourth and five rounds and begin to be notable by the seventh onward.
Prowess: Each time Rin receives an attack, she gains knowledge on how said attack exactly works. Attacks
Bulwark: Adopting a defensive stance, Rin greatly increases her defensive abilities dramatically at the cost of her attacks becoming slightly weaker. If this ability is used when it's still in effect, its duration is refreshed and its effect increased accordingly. Lasts 3 posts.
Culling Scales: Sand begins to overflow from Rin's scales, blowing around and damaging anyone else who comes in contact with them. This ability deals damage directly proportional to the time Rin has spent inside of combat; starting off as practically harmless and picking up power until the seven consecutive round she's been in combat. Its damage becomes moderate by the third or fourth round and severe by the seventh.
Shackles: Conjures magical chains that immobilize an enemy on his/her place, rendering them unable to move or attack for two post. If the target has been dazed by Shield Bash, this effect lasts three posts instead. Cooldown of two posts.
Shield Bash: Rin gains a temporary burst of speed and dashes towards an enemy before hitting them with her shield. Deals a moderate amount of damage and dazes the enemy, greatly reduces the damage dealt by the target's two next successful ability if this attack hits. The same enemy may be effect by this effect more than once.
Digivolves To To be determined
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Post by Deleted on Nov 28, 2015 21:04:27 GMT
Reserved number one.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 28, 2015 21:04:41 GMT
Reserved number two.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 28, 2015 21:04:58 GMT
And reserved number three. Profile finished and ready for evaluation!
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Post by Timmir on Nov 30, 2015 18:22:24 GMT
Well first thing first. I'm going to have to ask you to use at least ten sentences to describe the appearance Elaiomon and Astaphamon. With that on the side, I will admit that your character looks good. Though I'm afraid I do have to ask if that original art yours or someone elses.
Elaiomon What is the maximum damage potential this move can do? Sorry, but I have to make sure that you can't just sit in the background while technically fighting, building this ability to the point where you can one hit a Champion, or a SM for that matter. And for that matter, does the damage this move reset after Rin uses it? How long does the 'daze' effect last? For an entire post, or just for the next attack? Longer? Depending on the length, I might have to ask for a cooldown on this move.
Astaphamon Again, what's the maximum potential for this, as we can't have you go limitless. Also, seeing how your forms have the same attacks, the same questions as above apply to this forms versions of the attack as well.
Overall I do like the look of this character. Just need you to clarify the things above, and we'll take it from there. |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 30, 2015 19:16:34 GMT
Changes done! Thanks for the input.
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Post by Timmir on Nov 30, 2015 23:09:58 GMT
Alright. Everything looks good to me. I'll go ahead and give this a pass. Accepted |
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