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Post by paarthurnax on Sept 3, 2014 20:08:15 GMT
Adding the secondary evolution line (still to be purchased, that's why the forms are tagged as "LOCKED") Appearance:  Champion: KendoGarurumon (LOCKED) Attribute: Data Family/ies: Nature Spirits Type: Attacks: - Howling Laser: fires off a blue coloured laser from his mouth, which can be launched as a single projectile or a continuous stream of energy.
- Wolf Saber: extending his "wings", the Digimon will use the weels located behind its paws to run to the enemy, slicing everything standing on both of his sides (at close range). It can be chained up in following posts. If the fight is taking place mid-air, however, Kendogarurumon won't be able to turn as fast, so the enemy is likely to avoid his following attack, was him to miss the first one. 1 post cooldown.
- Solar Beam: Kendogarurumon's sabers begin glowing in a dark golden hue. As it absorbs solar energy, the golden shifts from gold to yellow, and then to white, at which point the Digimon releases a solar-powered energy stream that is able to hit hard and inflict serious burnings on the enemy, due to the light's heat. Takes one posts to charge in daylight, and three times as much when indoors or at night. 2 posts cooldown.
- Tundra Hunter: focusing on the target, KendoGarurumon stays still for a moment. Then he will dash forward at an amazing speed, preventing any kind of blocking and slashing the enemy with one of his wing blades. It's rather easy to avoid, as he advances in a straight line, but can catch many opponents off-guard due to the sudden factor of the attack. 1 post cooldown, should the attack succeed.
Digivolves To: Beowolfmon
Appearance:  Ultimate: Beowolfmon (LOCKED) Attribute: Data Family/ies: Type: Passive Traits: - Holy Hunter: Beowolfmon's attacks that involve the use of his sword, Trinität, and/or missile launcher, Roland Zwei, have increased power when hitting a Holy Beast or an Angel type Digimon, such as Makuramon or Angemon, respectively.
Attacks: - Trinity Force: Slashing his Trinität at the enemy, Beowolfmon performs a six hit combo faster than usual. The fifth hit is an uppercut that launches enemies up into the air, and he can either choose to follow with a downward slash that makes them crash into the ground or use another attack. One post cooldown.
- Licht Angriff:Using his Roland Zwei, Beowolfmon launches a barrage of missiles towards an enemy, followed by a piercing, powerful light beam. The missiles stun the target slightly on impact, and being hit by the light beam removes this effect.
- Frozen Hunter: Beowolfmon calls forth a huge amount of energy, creating the ghostly image of an icy, blazing blue wolf. As he rushes forward to strike his enemy, the wolf envelops his body, striking anything that stands in his path for a great amount of damage. Afterwards, the image banishes, and both this and Trinity Force enter a 2 post cooldown.
- Charging Block:;Beowolfmon uses his Trinität to deflect attacks. If it was elemental or energy based, he won't block it entirely and take reduced damage, but the saber stores a charge that can be used by Beowolfmon to increase the power of his blade for two posts. Trinität can store up to three charges that may be used anytime, or never at all if chosen (125% increased power when a charge is stored, 150% when 2 stored, 200% when 3 stored). Upon activation, the sword acquires a blueish haze, signalizing the power augment. After spending the stored power, the power to charge goes on cooldown for 3 posts. Charges can be stored indefinately.
- Dark Repulser:When the Beosaber acquires the third charge, Beowolfmon can choose to release all the power at once by either swinging the sword in wide arcs four times or a single, more focused slash. After performing the movement, an arc-shaped light attack is released from the sword from each attack. If chose to split into four, Trinität releases short, but wide arcs that hit the enemy in a quick succesion. If the single variant is executed, the arc beam will be a lot bigger, thus becoming very difficult to be avoided if the enemy stands in front of Beowolfmon. After using this attack, Charging Block's energy storing enters a 4 posts cooldown.
: MagnaGarurumon
Appearance:  Mega: MagnaGarurumon (LOCKED) Attribute: Vaccine Family/ies: Metal Empire,Virus Busters Type: Cyborg Passive Traits:- Shifter:;MagnaGarurumon can deploy any part of his armor at any given time, either his right arm "Sniper Phantom", his left arm "Striker Phantom", or his flying unit. Doing so will lower his defenses and prevent him using attacks which involved the use of the lost weapons. However, doing so does have its perks: it grants him the ability of using his two light sabers and grants a massive speed boost to his movements. MagnaGarurumon can recover the lost armor in 2 posts (the one when he lost it and the following one)
Attacks: -While armored - Sniper Phantom: From up to five miles away from a target, MagnaGarurumon prepares his Sniper Phantom for a powerful laser attack. A hologram with powerful zooming capabilities appears on the weapon as the Digimon readies to fire, informing of all factors that could affect the shot's course. When he has chosen his target, the silent blast is fired, traveling at great speeds to ensure the hit, although it is avoidable. However, it is very easy to fall victim to the Sniper Phantom if MagnaGarurumon is undetected or the enemy is distracted by another fight.
- Machine Gun Destroy: Taking flight, MagnaGarurumon fires off a huge barrage of missiles and light beams from his Striker and Sniper Phantom, that rain down onto his enemies. This attack can prove to be devastating, as it releases the destruction power of a nuclear warhead into a single or reduced group of foes, but makes MagnaGarurumon run out of ammunition on his Striker Phantom and Sniper (not the flying unit)which has to be replenished over the next two posts. This is arguably his strongest burst attack, capable of seriously injuring an enemy if caught by the whole discharge.
- Magna Missiles: A quick barrage of missiles is fired from the Striker Phantom, exploding upon impact and damaging both the target and nearby surrounding units.
- Light Burst:;grabbing an enemy, usually after a Machine Gun Destroy attack, MagnaGarurumon roars as the lasers on his flying unit fire a damaging, point-blank range attack that strike the immobilized foe. Afterwards, the Digimon jumps backwards, leaving the flying unit behind in the process.
-Without Armor
- Dual Flurry:Using his two light sabers, MagnaGarurumon is able to perform rapid combos of many strikes to defend himself while in melee range, which can prove overwhelming to foes due to the speed of the hits and the fact that they have to care for both sabers at the same time.
- Stellar Hunter:the evolved version of Frozen Hunter, this attack covers MagnaGarurumon in a coat of light, turning him into a flash that moves at supersonic speed. His data is then made intangible, thus rendering him able to pass through any enemy. If the enemy puts up a heavy defense, the damage will be severely weakened, but it will hit nonetheless. Avoiding is the best option. 3 posts cooldown.
Digivolves To: None
Profile linkHere is the code for an easier edit! Just add this between Dorugoramon and Alphamon Ouryuken [i]Appearance[/i]:
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[i]Champion[/i]: KendoGarurumon (LOCKED)
[i]Attribute[/i]: Data
[i]Family/ies[/i]: Nature Spirits
[i]Type[/i]:
[i]Attacks[/i]:
[ul type="disc"][li][i]Howling Laser[/i]: fires off a blue coloured laser from his mouth, which can be launched as a single projectile or a continuous stream of energy.[/li][li][i]Wolf Saber:[/i] extending his "wings", the Digimon will use the weels located behind its paws to run to the enemy, slicing everything standing on both of his sides (at close range). It can be chained up in following posts. If the fight is taking place mid-air, however, Kendogarurumon won't be able to turn as fast, so the enemy is likely to avoid his following attack, was him to miss the first one. 1 post cooldown.[/li][li][i]Solar Beam[/i]: Kendogarurumon's sabers begin glowing in a dark golden hue. As it absorbs solar energy, the golden shifts from gold to yellow, and then to white, at which point the Digimon releases a solar-powered energy stream that is able to hit hard and inflict serious burnings on the enemy, due to the light's heat. Takes one posts to charge in daylight, and three times as much when indoors or at night. 2 posts cooldown.[/li][li][i]Tundra Hunter:[/i] focusing on the target, KendoGarurumon stays still for a moment. Then he will dash forward at an amazing speed, preventing any kind of blocking and slashing the enemy with one of his wing blades. It's rather easy to avoid, as he advances in a straight line, but can catch many opponents off-guard due to the sudden factor of the attack. 1 post cooldown, should the attack succeed.[/li][/ul]
[i]Digivolves To[/i]: Beowolfmon
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[i]Appearance[/i]:
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[i]Ultimate[/i]: Beowolfmon (LOCKED)
[i]Attribute[/i]: Data
[i]Family/ies[/i]:
[i]Type[/i]:
[i]Passive Traits[/i]:
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[li][i]Holy Hunter:[/i] Beowolfmon's attacks that involve the use of his sword, Trinität, and/or missile launcher, Roland Zwei, have increased power when hitting a Holy Beast or an Angel type Digimon, such as Makuramon or Angemon, respectively.[/li]
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[i]Attacks[/i]:
[ul type="disc"][li][i]Trinity Force:[/i] Slashing his Trinität at the enemy, Beowolfmon performs a six hit combo faster than usual. The fifth hit is an uppercut that launches enemies up into the air, and he can either choose to follow with a downward slash that makes them crash into the ground or use another attack. One post cooldown.[/li][li][i]Licht Angriff:[/i]Using his Roland Zwei, Beowolfmon launches a barrage of missiles towards an enemy, followed by a piercing, powerful light beam. The missiles stun the target slightly on impact, and being hit by the light beam removes this effect.[/li][/ul][div][ul type="disc"][li][i]Frozen Hunter[/i]: Beowolfmon calls forth a huge amount of energy, creating the ghostly image of an icy, blazing blue wolf. As he rushes forward to strike his enemy, the wolf envelops his body, striking anything that stands in his path for a great amount of damage. Afterwards, the image banishes, and both this and Trinity Force enter a 2 post cooldown.[/li][li][i]Charging Block:;[/i]Beowolfmon uses his Trinität to deflect attacks. If it was elemental or energy based, he won't block it entirely and take reduced damage, but the saber stores a charge that can be used by Beowolfmon to increase the power of his blade for two posts. Trinität can store up to three charges that may be used anytime, or never at all if chosen (125% increased power when a charge is stored, 150% when 2 stored, 200% when 3 stored). Upon activation, the sword acquires a blueish haze, signalizing the power augment. After spending the stored power, the power to charge goes on cooldown for three posts. Charges can be stored indefinately.[/li][li][i]Dark Repulser:[/i]When the Beosaber acquires the third charge, Beowolfmon can choose to release all the power at once by either swinging the sword in wide arcs four times or a single, more focused slash. After performing the movement, an arc-shaped light attack is released from the sword from each attack. If chose to split into four, Trinität releases short, but wide arcs that hit the enemy in a quick succesion. If the single variant is executed, the arc beam will be a lot bigger, thus becoming very difficult to be avoided if the enemy stands in front of Beowolfmon. After using this attack, Charging Block's energy storing enters a 4 posts cooldown.
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[i]Digivolves To[/i]: MagnaGarurumon
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[i]Appearance[/i]:
[img alt="" src="http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm176/mharkmhadz_05/MagnaGarurumon.png" style="max-width:100%;"]
[i]Mega[/i]: MagnaGarurumon (LOCKED)
[i]Attribute[/i]: Vaccine
[i]Family/ies[/i]: Metal Empire,Virus Busters
[i]Type[/i]: Cyborg
[i]Passive Traits:[/i]
[ul type="disc"][li][i]Shifter[/i]:;MagnaGarurumon can deploy any part of his armor at any given time, either his right arm "Sniper Phantom", his left arm "Striker Phantom", or his flying unit. Doing so will lower his defenses and prevent him using attacks which involved the use of the lost weapons. However, doing so does have its perks: it grants him the ability of using his two light sabers and grants a massive speed boost to his movements. MagnaGarurumon can recover the lost armor in 2 posts (the one when he lost it and the following one)[/li][/ul]
[i]Attacks[/i]:
-While armored
[ul type="disc"][li][i]Sniper Phantom:[/i] From up to five miles away from a target, MagnaGarurumon prepares his Sniper Phantom for a powerful laser attack. A hologram with powerful zooming capabilities appears on the weapon as the Digimon readies to fire, informing of all factors that could affect the shot's course. When he has chosen his target, the silent blast is fired, traveling at great speeds to ensure the hit, although it is avoidable. However, it is very easy to fall victim to the Sniper Phantom if MagnaGarurumon is undetected or the enemy is distracted by another fight.[/li][li][i]Machine Gun Destroy[/i]: Taking flight, MagnaGarurumon fires off a huge barrage of missiles and light beams from his Striker and Sniper Phantom, that rain down onto his enemies. This attack can prove to be devastating, as it releases the destruction power of a nuclear warhead into a single or reduced group of foes, but makes MagnaGarurumon run out of ammunition on his [i]Striker Phantom and Sniper (not the flying unit)[/i]which has to be replenished over the next two posts. This is arguably his strongest burst attack, capable of seriously injuring an enemy if caught by the whole discharge.[/li][li][i]Magna Missiles:[/i] A quick barrage of missiles is fired from the Striker Phantom, exploding upon impact and damaging both the target and nearby surrounding units.[/li][li][i]Light Burst:[/i];grabbing an enemy, usually after a Machine Gun Destroy attack, MagnaGarurumon roars as the lasers on his flying unit fire a damaging, point-blank range attack that strike the immobilized foe. Afterwards, the Digimon jumps backwards, leaving the flying unit behind in the process.[/li][/ul][div]
-Without Armor[/div][ul type="disc"][li][i]Dual Flurry[/i]:Using his two light sabers, MagnaGarurumon is able to perform rapid combos of many strikes to defend himself while in melee range, which can prove overwhelming to foes due to the speed of the hits and the fact that they have to care for both sabers at the same time.[/li][li][i]Stellar Hunter[/i]:the evolved version of Frozen Hunter, this attack covers MagnaGarurumon in a coat of light, turning him into a flash that moves at supersonic speed. His data is then made intangible, thus rendering him able to pass through any enemy. If the enemy puts up a heavy defense, the damage will be severely weakened, but it will hit nonetheless. Avoiding is the best option. 3 posts cooldown.[/li][/ul]
[i]Digivolves To[/i]: None
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Post by ♛SuperMeip ヌƵ on Sept 3, 2014 23:27:46 GMT
Wolf Sabre:
It says it can hit three times in one post? That's quick in a row right? Cause otherwise that may leave lots of open ends in a post.
Charging Block:
This needs a cooldown between storage of charges otherwise it's shield+ for free.
Light Burst:
If he uses this after Machine Gun Destroy won't he be out of ammunition? So it wouldn't work.
Stellar Hunter:
This needs a cool down definitely, and/or maybe a charge up. I'm guessing the display gives prior warning so they have time to dodge but still needs a cooldown because invulnerability and unblock-able* attack.
Other notes
*Just remember, nothing is truly unblock-able 100%
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Post by paarthurnax on Sept 3, 2014 23:50:34 GMT
Fixed. One note, though, on Charging Block: if Beowolfmon has a sword, can't he use it to deflect projectiles naturally, without having to be an actual ability? Obviously, it would not be as strong as a shield attack, or anything like that. It was just to note that he had to deflect attacks in order to store energy. If needed, though, I'll add the cooldown.
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Post by ♛SuperMeip ヌƵ on Sept 4, 2014 0:02:33 GMT
Yea you definitely need the cooldown, but yea he can try to deflect attacks and deal with recoil and the fact they are energy attacks which aren't really deflect-able with a solid weapon very well.
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Post by paarthurnax on Sept 4, 2014 0:10:26 GMT
Ok, I added the CD for the energy storing, and clarified that if the attack was energy base, damage will be applied, albeit reduced. Since that kind of blocking is natural, I didn't add a cooldown to the block itself, but rather to the ability. Hope it's good now :3
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Post by ♛SuperMeip ヌƵ on Sept 6, 2014 5:08:15 GMT
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Post by soveliss on Sept 6, 2014 13:28:34 GMT
Approved!
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Post by paarthurnax on Sept 6, 2014 16:01:28 GMT
Could anyone please move the secondary evolution line and put it between Dorugoramon and Alphamon? It's purely visual. If needed, you could gave me the thread code and I would do it myself.
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Post by soveliss on Sept 6, 2014 16:12:13 GMT
Done
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Post by paarthurnax on Sept 6, 2014 19:56:57 GMT
New edits!!! It's an attack overhaul, you just have to add these changes at the end of the listed attacks. I also add passive traits and natural abilities, which form a separate section between the "Type" and "Attacks" sections of each Digimon form.
-BlackGrowlmon:
-Changes to these attacks -Dark Plasma Blade: Add: Inflict's a minor dizzyness effect 2 post due to dark energy infecting the wounds, which can be refreshed by successive attacks. -Black Cross Slash: Add: Inflicts Dark Blight on impact, which renders any status ailments produced by the foe's attacks (such as paralysis) uneffective for 3 of their posts.
-MetalGreymon X:
-Add new section: Passive traits:- BioMechanical Menace: MG-X's attacks against Digimon that do not belong to the Metal Empire family or have any mechanical parts in their bodies are enhanced by 20%.
-Changes to these attacks: - Giga Flame: Increase cooldown from 1 to 2 posts. Add: Inflicts (severe) burnings in the target, which are worse if hit in melee range, for 2 posts.
- Exa Blast: Add: enemies which were directly impacted by the missiles, instead of the explosion's collateral damage, are stunned for 1 of their posts.
-Dorugoramon:-Add new sections: Passive Traits:- Sturdy Armor: Dorugoramon's Chrome Digizoid armor makes physical attacks less effective, although he still takes full damage from energy/elemental based ones.
Natural Abilities: - Dragonrend: once per 5 posts, Dorugoramon may release a powerful roar that strucks anyone near him, ally or enemy. The bloodlust and rage awakened by his past memories create a such intense pressure that makes anyone hearing it but him lose the ability to fly for 3 posts. Supermega's and DNA's aren't affected, due to one being stronger and another having 2 minds to share the pain. Cooldown begins after the effect fades.
-Add changes to these attacks - Doru Djiin: Add: Also sears the oponent on impact, causing burnings that deal damage and partially prevents movement in the affected part of the enemy's body due to the sheer pain (this effect has a 3 posts CD).
- Metal Burst: Add: After charging, Dorugoramon may keep the stored energy and release it when he pleases.
- Chrome Frenzy: Add: Causes lacerations and burnings if attacking exposed skin, which deal damage over 3 posts with a 3 post cooldown that begins after this effect fades.
-Alphamon Ouryuken:
-New passives to add below "Kyukyoku Senjin Ouryuken" in the Passive Traits section: - Enhanced Flight: Alphamon can actually fly without using his wings; instead, they allow for faster manuevers and recoveries mid-air.
- Sturdy Armor: Alphamon's Chrome Digizoid armor makes physical attacks less effective, although he still takes full damage from energy/elemental based ones.
New changes to the following attacks: - Digital Block: Add: Reflected attacks travel at 150% of their previous speed and deal 125% damage. If chose to reflect, Digital Block goes on cooldown for 4 posts.
- Ouryuwave: Remove this: "Not as useful mid-air, for the opponent has it easier to avoid the attack by descending slightly". Add instead: enemies caught by the wave are knocked back due to the energy wave's sheer pressure, unable to react as fast to Alphamon's next movement after recovering from the hit.
- Digitalize of Soul: Add: as well as piercing/severing an opponent's wings.
- Ultimate Cannon Ouryuken: change "ally or demon" to "ally or enemy". Add: It will destroy any field-changing techniques, including illusion ones, due to the nuke's sheer power.
-Sangloupmon:-Add new section: Natural ability:
- Jaeger: once per three posts, Sangloupmon can melt with the shadows to advance rapidly in a straight line, allowing for surprise attacks or last-moment dodges. Sangloupmon is invulnerable during the second or two he is a shadow.
New attack to add under "Dark Haze"! - Hunting Shadows: Sangloupmon creates a pack made of up to 5 ghostly images of himself that last for 3 posts. He may then attack alongside his new companions, which are special: when they bite or use Swipe at an enemy, they turn into dark blazes with a small explosion, causing small damage and dizzyness for 1 posts. Every wolf that hits add up to the count of the effect (if 2 wolves hit at once, 2 posts), or refreshes it if it had already faded. Cooldown for 2 post+number of wolves created, beggining after the last wolf is destroyed. Wolves share vision with Sangloupmon at all times.
-BlackRapidmon:
New Attack to add under "Explosive Uppercut"! - Smoke Screen: Up to twice per thread, BlackRapidmon can shoot a tactical grenade that creates a smoke layer that covers the area for 3 posts. Inside it, BlackRapidmon's passives are applied all the time, as if it they were fighting in the darkness of night. Enemies and allies inside suffer from very limited vision and awareness of BlackRapidmon's movements. These effects dissappear when leaving the smoke-covered area.
I know it's long, but I thought my attacks were too simple and lacking compared to those of other members, so bear with me :3 Here I will leave you the code of the new sections and attacks. The attacks that only need changes can have the new sentences added by simple copy-paste (which means, no need of code). Please tell me by pm or a post if having any doubts while editing (I know it's difficult, even though I tried to make it as clear as possible). The order of the sections in each of Dorumon's forms should go: Passive Traits-> Natural Abilities -> Attacks. Here is the code of the new sections and new attacks! -Metal Greymon X [i]Passive traits:[/i]
[ul type="disc"]
[li][i][b]BioMechanical Menace:[/b][/i] MG-X's attacks against Digimon that do not belong to the Metal Empire family or have any mechanical parts in their bodies are enhanced by 20%.[/li]
[/ul]-Dorugoramon [i]Passive Traits:[/i]
[ul type="disc"][li][b style="font-style:italic;"]Sturdy Armor:[/b] Dorugoramon's Chrome Digizoid armor makes physical attacks less effective, although he still takes full damage from energy/elemental based ones.[/li][/ul]
[i]Natural Abilities: [/i]
[ul type="disc"][li][b][i]Dragonrend:[/i][/b] once per 5 posts, Dorugoramon may release a powerful roar that strucks anyone near him, ally or enemy. The bloodlust and rage awakened by his past memories create a such intense pressure that makes anyone hearing it but him lose the ability to fly for 3 posts. Supermega's and DNA's aren't affected, due to one being stronger and another having 2 minds to share the pain. Cooldown begins after the effect fades.[/li][/ul]
-Alphamon Ouryuken [ul type="disc"][li][b][i]Enhanced Flight:[/i][/b] Alphamon can actually fly without using his wings; instead, they allow for faster manuevers and recoveries mid-air.[/li][li][b][i]Sturdy Armor:[/i][/b] Alphamon's Chrome Digizoid armor makes physical attacks less effective, although he still takes full damage from energy/elemental based ones.
[/li][/ul]-Sangloupmon [i]Natural ability:[/i]
[ul type="disc"][li][b][i]Jaeger:[/i][/b] once per three posts, Sangloupmon can melt with the shadows to advance rapidly in a straight line, allowing for surprise attacks or last-moment dodges. Sangloupmon is invulnerable during the second or two he is a shadow.[/li][/ul]
[ul type="disc"][li][b][i]Hunting Shadows:[/i][/b] Sangloupmon creates a pack made of up to 5 ghostly images of himself that last for 3 posts. He may then attack alongside his new companions, which are special: when they bite or use Swipe at an enemy, they turn into dark blazes with a small explosion, causing small damage and dizzyness for 1 posts. Every wolf that hits add up to the count of the effect (if 2 wolves hit at once, 2 posts), or refreshes it if it had already faded. Cooldown for 2 post+number of wolves created, beggining after the last wolf is destroyed. Wolves share vision with Sangloupmon at all times.[/li][/ul]
-BlackRapidmon [ul type="disc"][li][b]Smoke Screen:[/b] Up to twice per thread, BlackRapidmon can shoot a tactical grenade that creates a smoke layer that covers the area for 3 posts. Inside it, BlackRapidmon's passives are applied all the time, as if it they were fighting in the darkness of night. Enemies and allies inside suffer from very limited vision and awareness of BlackRapidmon's movements. These effects dissappear when leaving the smoke-covered area.[/li][/ul] |
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Post by paarthurnax on Sept 19, 2014 13:15:44 GMT
been 13 days so... bumperino
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Post by ♛SuperMeip ヌƵ on Sept 21, 2014 17:43:57 GMT
For Sangloupmon, Jaeger is an attack, not an ability, so yea choose one of the two or buy an upgrade.
Also hunting shadows, how durable are the wolves?
Also for Digital block, just nope, sorry but no to all that, the attack is more than good enough as it is. In fact it's already broken so i'm going to have to have you rewrite that original attack you already have. It's just not fair to be able to block that many attacks with no restriction on movement and be able to reflect too, i mean think of it, you could keep the shield up for a whole battle pretty much, blocking five attacks then reflecting the last one and still attack and move around. Not only that but he can choose the size? So yea, that attack needs to be completely rewritten.
Also for future reference, for edits like this please just write up the full attack, cause some of these don't make sense just added to the end and stuff and it just makes it take waaaay longer looking back and forth between the full attack and the edit to determine whether it's fair or not.
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Post by paarthurnax on Sept 21, 2014 18:29:39 GMT
Kay Meip, then attack overhaul v2 incoming! The attacks already existant will be marked as (rewritten) in the preview so it's easier to change. -BlackGrowlmon: Attacks- (rewritten) Dark Plasma Blade:BlackGrowlmon's armblades rise, forming a 90 degree angle with his arms, while starting glowing black, enhancing his attack's power, thus making him a bigger melee threat. Also, inflicts a minor dizzyness effect 2 post due to dark energy infecting the enemy's wounds, which can be refreshed by successive attacks. Can last up for 4 posts. If its maintained between posts, 2 posts cooldown.
- (rewritten) Black Cross Slash: Parting from the previous attack, Growlmon fires two black, wide, arch-shaped blasts at the enemy. Then, Dark Plasma Blade goes on cooldown for 2 posts.Inflicts Dark Blight on impact, which renders any status ailments produced by the foe's attacks (such as paralysis) uneffective for 3 of their posts.
-Metal Greymon X Passive traits:- BioMechanical Menace: MG-X's attacks against Digimon that do not belong to the Metal Empire family or have any mechanical parts in their bodies are enhanced by 20%.
Attacks:- (rewritten) Giga Flame: Unleashes a spreading flame breath attack from the mouth at incredibly high temperatures whose power is increases the closer the user is to the enemy. Might be used in a combo with the Trident Arm v.9.99 grappling attack. Inflicts (severe) burnings in the target, which are worse if hit in melee range, for 2 posts. 2 posts CD.
- (rewritten) Exa Blast: MetalGreymon X's chestplate opens, revealing three hidden rocket launchers. After a brief delay, three missiles will be shot from there towards any enemy digimon of choice. The missiles can spread to hit multiple targets with good damage, but focusing them all in a single foe can be devastating. 2 post cooldown. Enemies which were directly impacted by the missiles, instead of the explosion's collateral damage, are stunned for 1 of their posts.
-Dorugoramon Passive Traits:- Sturdy Armor: Dorugoramon's Chrome Digizoid armor makes physical attacks less effective, although he still takes full damage from energy/elemental based ones.
Natural Abilities: - Dragonrend: once per 5 posts, Dorugoramon may release a powerful roar that strucks anyone near him, ally or enemy. The bloodlust and rage awakened by his past memories create a such intense pressure that makes anyone hearing it but him lose the ability to fly for 3 posts. Supermega's and DNA's aren't affected, due to one being stronger and another having 2 minds to share the pain. Cooldown begins after the effect fades.
Attacks:- (rewritten) DORU Djiin: Dorugamon calls upon the power inside his Digicore, channeling it, and unleashes a powerful fire blast from his entire body (meaning it is the same size as him), which takes the form of a dragon diving for his prey. It is arguably one of this Mega's strongest attacks. It also sears the oponent on impact, causing burnings that deal damage and partially prevents movement in the affected part of the enemy's body due to the sheer pain (this effect has a 3 posts CD).1 post cooldown.
- (rewritten) Metal Burst: this is Dorugoramon's strongest attack. He will first concentrate his energy on himself, adotping a charging gesture (typical DBZ). After charging, Dorugoramon may keep the stored energy and release it when he pleases. Upon doing so, he will create a massive, spherical blast that emanates from himself and grows, up to having a radius of 3 miles, to which the attack will begin fading. This leaves Dorugoramon exhausted, not able to attack the following turn. 6 posts cooldown.
- (rewritten) Chrome Frenzy: Setting his Chrome-Digizoid claws in fire, Dorugoramon mercilessly slices the enemy with fast melee strikes in a furious manner. Due to the extreme heat generated in his hands, this is specially useful to shred through the armor of other digimon. Causes lacerations and burnings if attacking exposed skin, which deal damage over 3 enemy posts. Afterwards, the effect (not the attack) goes on CD for 3 of Dorugoramon's posts.
-Alphamon Ouryuken
New passives
- Enhanced Flight: Alphamon can actually fly without using his wings; instead, they allow for faster manuevers and recoveries mid-air.
- Sturdy Armor: Alphamon's Chrome Digizoid armor makes physical attacks less effective, although he still takes full damage from energy/elemental based ones.
Attacks:- (rewritten) Digital Block: with a simple gesture, Alphamon creates a green coloured, translucid wall big enough to shield himself and anything standing behind it, as long as it is Alphamon's size or smaller. Despite only offering frontal protection, it can withstand up to six different enemy attacks (barrage counts as one) before fading away. Three posts cooldown. Alphamon can, however, choose to actually reflect one of the first three attacks that were blocked towards his enemy, but doing so will make the shield disappear, going on cooldown for four posts.
- (rewritten) Ouryuwave: Alphamon swings his blade, releasing an energy shockwave that rapidly spreads in a cone (growing in height and width) resembling a dragon opening his wings and diving at his prey. Enemies caught by the wave are knocked back due to the energy wave's sheer pressure, unable to react as fast to Alphamon's next movement after recovering from the hit.
- (rewritten) Digitalize of Soul: Alphamon spreads his hand open and points towards a desired enemy or group of foes. After choosing the target, a great amount of green coloured blasts is fired from Alphamon's palm. These blasts feature strong piercing potential, capable of shredding through sturdy Chrome Digizoid armor or equipment (although the damage is reduced if this was to happen). Great for striking down flying targets, as well as piercing/severing an opponent's wings.
- (rewritten) Ultimate Cannon Ouryuken: Alphamon morphs his Ouryuken by spreading the outer part of the blade to the sides and separating the inner part, creating a small ranure. Then, those two parts of the cannon start spinning in opposite directions (clockwise and counterclockwise for the outer and inner parts, respectively), creating a condensed ball of digital energy. After charging, he unleashes the nuke, which explodes on on impact with terrain or any digimon, expanding and creating a massive blast that follows its impact direction. If fired to the ground, it'll erupt upwards, as if it was a geiser, heavy damaging the terrain. This attack features incredible destructive power, hence why it goes on cooldown for 3 posts. Its effects, are truly demolishing on any Digimon should the initial nuke collide with the Digimon, since they'll take damage from both the explosion and the blast generated afterwards. It will also destroy any field-changing techniques, including illusion ones, due to the nuke's sheer power.
-Sangloupmon New attack - Hunting Shadows: Sangloupmon creates a pack made of up to 5 ghostly images of himself that last for 3 posts. He may then attack alongside his new companions, which are special: when they bite or use Swipe at an enemy, they turn into dark blazes with a small explosion, causing small damage and dizzyness for 1 posts. Every wolf that hits add up to the count of the effect (if 2 wolves hit at once, 2 posts), or refreshes it if it had already faded. Cooldown for 2 post+number of wolves created, beggining after the last wolf is destroyed. Wolves share vision with Sangloupmon at all times. Wolves last for 2 of Sangloupmon's posts (if they do not explode before, that is). Shadows explode after taking physical damage, but are immune to energy attacks.
-BlackRapidmon New attack - Smoke Screen: Up to twice per thread, BlackRapidmon can shoot a tactical grenade that creates a smoke layer that covers the area for 3 posts. Inside it, BlackRapidmon's passives are applied all the time, as if it they were fighting in the darkness of night. Enemies and allies inside suffer from very limited vision and awareness of BlackRapidmon's movements. These effects dissappear when leaving the smoke-covered area.
Aaaand here's the code. Hope it's good now.
-BlackGrowlmon:
[i]Attacks[/i]
[ul type="disc"][li][i style="font-weight:bold;"]Dark Plasma Blade:[/i]BlackGrowlmon's armblades rise, forming a 90 degree angle with his arms, while starting glowing black, enhancing his attack's power, thus making him a bigger melee threat. Also, inflicts a minor dizzyness effect 2 post due to dark energy infecting the enemy's wounds, which can be refreshed by successive attacks. Can last up for 4 posts. If its maintained between posts, 2 posts cooldown.[/li][li](rewritten) [b style="font-style:italic;"]Black Cross Slash: [/b]Parting from the previous attack, Growlmon fires two black, wide, arch-shaped blasts at the enemy. Then, Dark Plasma Blade goes on cooldown for 2 posts.[b style="font-style:italic;"][/b]Inflicts Dark Blight on impact, which renders any status ailments produced by the foe's attacks (such as paralysis) uneffective for 3 of their posts.[/li][/ul]
-Metal Greymon X
[i]Passive traits:[/i]
[ul type="disc"]
[li][i][b]BioMechanical Menace:[/b][/i] MG-X's attacks against Digimon that do not belong to the Metal Empire family or have any mechanical parts in their bodies are enhanced by 20%.[/li]
[/ul][i]Attacks:[/i]
[ul type="disc"][li][i][/i][b style="font-style:italic;"]Giga Flame:[/b] Unleashes a spreading flame breath attack from the mouth at incredibly high temperatures whose power is increases the closer the user is to the enemy. Might be used in a combo with the Trident Arm v.9.99 grappling attack. Inflicts (severe) burnings in the target, which are worse if hit in melee range, for 2 posts. 2 posts CD.[/li][li][i][/i][b style="font-style:italic;"]Exa Blast:[/b]MetalGreymon X's chestplate opens, revealing three hidden rocket launchers. After a brief delay, three missiles will be shot from there towards any enemy digimon of choice. The missiles can spread to hit multiple targets with good damage, but focusing them all in a single foe can be devastating. 2 post cooldown. Enemies which were directly impacted by the missiles, instead of the explosion's collateral damage, are stunned for 1 of their posts.[/li][/ul]
-Dorugoramon
[i]Passive Traits:[/i]
[ul type="disc"][li][b style="font-style:italic;"]Sturdy Armor:[/b] Dorugoramon's Chrome Digizoid armor makes physical attacks less effective, although he still takes full damage from energy/elemental based ones.[/li][/ul]
[i]Natural Abilities: [/i]
[ul type="disc"][li][b][i]Dragonrend:[/i][/b] once per 5 posts, Dorugoramon may release a powerful roar that strucks anyone near him, ally or enemy. The bloodlust and rage awakened by his past memories create a such intense pressure that makes anyone hearing it but him lose the ability to fly for 3 posts. Supermega's and DNA's aren't affected, due to one being stronger and another having 2 minds to share the pain. Cooldown begins after the effect fades.[/li][/ul][div]
[i]Attacks:[/i]
[ul type="disc"][li][i][/i][b style="font-style:italic;"]DORU Djiin:[/b]Dorugamon calls upon the power inside his Digicore, channeling it, and unleashes a powerful fire blast from his entire body (meaning it is the same size as him), which takes the form of a dragon diving for his prey. It is arguably one of this Mega's strongest attacks. It also sears the oponent on impact, causing burnings that deal damage and partially prevents movement in the affected part of the enemy's body due to the sheer pain (this effect has a 3 posts CD).1 post cooldown.[/li][li][i][/i][b style="font-style:italic;"]Metal Burst:[/b]this is Dorugoramon's strongest attack. He will first concentrate his energy on himself, adotping a charging gesture (typical DBZ). After charging, Dorugoramon may keep the stored energy and release it when he pleases. Upon doing so, he will create a massive, spherical blast that emanates from himself and grows, up to having a radius of 3 miles, to which the attack will begin fading. This leaves Dorugoramon exhausted, not able to attack the following turn. 6 posts cooldown.[/li][li][i][/i][b style="font-style:italic;"]Chrome Frenzy:[/b]Setting his Chrome-Digizoid claws in fire, Dorugoramon mercilessly slices the enemy with fast melee strikes in a furious manner. Due to the extreme heat generated in his hands, this is specially useful to shred through the armor of other digimon.[span style="font-size:10pt;"]Causes lacerations and burnings if attacking exposed skin, which deal damage over 3 enemy posts. Afterwards, the effect (not the attack) goes on CD for 3 of Dorugoramon's posts.[/span][/li][/ul][/div]
-Alphamon Ouryuken
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New passives
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[ul type="disc"][li][b][i]Enhanced Flight:[/i][/b] Alphamon can actually fly without using his wings; instead, they allow for faster manuevers and recoveries mid-air.[/li][li][b][i]Sturdy Armor:[/i][/b] Alphamon's Chrome Digizoid armor makes physical attacks less effective, although he still takes full damage from energy/elemental based ones.[/li][/ul][div]
[i]Attacks:[/i]
[ul type="disc"][li][i][/i][b style="font-style:italic;"]Digital Block:[/b]with a simple gesture, Alphamon creates a green coloured, translucid wall big enough to shield himself and anything standing behind it, as long as it is Alphamon's size or smaller. Despite only offering frontal protection, it can withstand up to six different enemy attacks (barrage counts as one) before fading away. Three posts cooldown. Alphamon can, however, choose to actually reflect one of the first three attacks that were blocked towards his enemy, but doing so will make the shield disappear, going on cooldown for four posts.[/li][li][i][/i][b style="font-style:italic;"]Ouryuwave:[/b]Alphamon swings his blade, releasing an energy shockwave that rapidly spreads in a cone (growing in height and width) resembling a dragon opening his wings and diving at his prey. Enemies caught by the wave are knocked back due to the energy wave's sheer pressure, unable to react as fast to Alphamon's next movement after recovering from the hit.
[/li][li][i] [/i][b style="font-style:italic;"]Digitalize of Soul:[/b]Alphamon spreads his hand open and points towards a desired enemy or group of foes. After choosing the target, a great amount of green coloured blasts is fired from Alphamon's palm. These blasts feature strong piercing potential, capable of shredding through sturdy Chrome Digizoid armor or equipment (although the damage is reduced if this was to happen). Great for striking down flying targets, as well as piercing/severing an opponent's wings.
[/li][li][i][/i][b style="font-style:italic;"]Ultimate Cannon Ouryuken:[/b]Alphamon morphs his Ouryuken by spreading the outer part of the blade to the sides and separating the inner part, creating a small ranure. Then, those two parts of the cannon start spinning in opposite directions (clockwise and counterclockwise for the outer and inner parts, respectively), creating a condensed ball of digital energy. After charging, he unleashes the nuke, which explodes on on impact with terrain or any digimon, expanding and creating a massive blast that follows its impact direction. If fired to the ground, it'll erupt upwards, as if it was a geiser, heavy damaging the terrain. This attack features incredible destructive power, hence why it goes on cooldown for 3 posts. Its effects, are truly demolishing on any Digimon should the initial nuke collide with the Digimon, since they'll take damage from both the explosion and the blast generated afterwards. It will also destroy any field-changing techniques, including illusion ones, due to the nuke's sheer power.
[/li][/ul][/div]
-Sangloupmon
New attack
[ul type="disc"][li][b][i]Hunting Shadows:[/i][/b] Sangloupmon creates a pack made of up to 5 ghostly images of himself that last for 3 posts. He may then attack alongside his new companions, which are special: when they bite or use Swipe at an enemy, they turn into dark blazes with a small explosion, causing small damage and dizzyness for 1 posts. Every wolf that hits add up to the count of the effect (if 2 wolves hit at once, 2 posts), or refreshes it if it had already faded. Cooldown for 2 post+number of wolves created, beggining after the last wolf is destroyed. Wolves share vision with Sangloupmon at all times. Wolves last for 2 of Sangloupmon's posts (if they do not explode before, that is). Shadows explode after taking physical damage, but are immune to energy attacks.[/li][/ul]
-BlackRapidmon
New attack
[ul type="disc"][li][b][i]Smoke Screen[/i]:[/b] Up to twice per thread, BlackRapidmon can shoot a tactical grenade that creates a smoke layer that covers the area for 3 posts. Inside it, BlackRapidmon's passives are applied all the time, as if it they were fighting in the darkness of night. Enemies and allies inside suffer from very limited vision and awareness of BlackRapidmon's movements. These effects dissappear when leaving the smoke-covered area.[/li][/ul][div]
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Post by ♛SuperMeip ヌƵ on Sept 25, 2014 15:01:05 GMT
Hunting Shadows: So they last for however many hits until 3 posts? Cause they should be destructible earlier if they take some hits.
Digital block: For blocking six attacks i'd say raise it to a three post cooldown
Also: Waiting on a verdict for a seven mile range on that attack, not sure if it's allowed so standby on that one,
Also Also: Remember, the missiles aren't homing, there are no homing attacks, just a reminder.
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Post by paarthurnax on Sept 25, 2014 15:04:40 GMT
Fixed. Though the Ouryu Cannon was approved as I got the profile approved for the first time (with it's blast radius being 7 miles as well) , so couldn't I just delete its changes? Also, no homing attacks are described. By targeting I mean choosing the enemy to attempt the hit :S
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