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Post by Raspberly on Nov 8, 2018 15:44:58 GMT
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Amelie
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Post by Amelie on Nov 11, 2018 22:09:10 GMT
Not a lotta stuff.
—You should differentiate passives from non-passives somehow. I can guess which ones are and which aren't, but you should still mark them appropriately.
—Lonely Moonchild: If this is a passive ability, it should be 5% to one target at most. If it's not, you should give it a duration and a cooldown.
Should be all.
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Post by Ayaka and Coolmon on Nov 11, 2018 22:37:31 GMT
Done, hope that's better.
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Amelie
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Post by Amelie on Nov 11, 2018 23:12:18 GMT
That's more like it!
Approved.
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Post by Ayaka and Coolmon on Jan 26, 2019 22:25:33 GMT
hi don't open this unless you're a staff member Assuming people actually respect that, I'm gonna need the good person that 2/2s this to put this above Coolmon's bit in her profile. Also change the title of the thread to Aya and Her Cool Rabbit or something. Name: Maeda, Ayaka Alias: Aya Age: 20 Gender: Female Height: 5’9 Weight: 145 lbs Alignment: Lawful Neutral Birth Date: 12-26 Birth Place: Shibuya, Japan Skills/Talents: Physical Therapy: Aya, while still just a student, possesses a good bit of know-how when it comes to this specific field of business. Quick On The Draw: Aya’s pretty much capable of giving a situation a glance over and giving an educated guess on what’s going on/if a problem’s presented itself and how to rectify it. Backpack Contents: - A book. Never know when you're going to need something to read.
- A water bottle. Hydration's important.
Digivice: A D-3 with a pink grip. Pink like a particular Cutemon... Personality: The hippocratic oath goes as follows: Do no harm. Ayaka Maeda likes to imagine she follows this oath as closely as she can. The young lady is gentle and caring, oftentimes to a fault. In fact? She wouldn't hurt a fly if she could help it. Another key characteristic to note with this person is that she's pretty humble. Not one to brag or boast about her accomplishments, nor one to take her failures pretty harshly. Or, so she tries. She thinks that boasting a bunch is for people with a big ego. A big ego is something she doesn't have. She's also not very forceful, though she can grow a spine when needed and adamantly refuse on her life to do something if she thinks it appropriate. She's a bit of a coward, too. Like most humans can be. Aya, despite her background, is pretty superstitious, and easily cowers under the idea of ghosts and/or ghost stories. Despite this glaring shortcoming, Aya's still able to push forward in life. She's basically a pretty normal person. Well, as normal as normal can be, really. Can she be faulted for wanting to help the people around her? Appearance: Standing at about 5’10, Aya’s a pretty darn tall young lady! She’s got a clean face, lilac-colored hair (it’s dyed), and lavender eyes. When it comes to how she dresses, she’s usually found wearing a button-up shirt, leggings, a skirt, and some simple shoes. A tie might sometimes be found amongst the ensemble, as well as a coat. The Digital World, however, changes Aya’s outfit to a set of black armor. Complete with gloves and boots. Pretty easy to move in, and it offers her a limited amount of protection. Oh, and it turns her glasses into contacts. FaceClaim: Fate/Grand Order • Shielder/Mashu Kyrielight • Aya Maeda Personal History: It's said that family's incredibly important. That they're the only ones you'll be stuck with throughout your life. For Aya, this was actually pretty much how it was. Born to two parents that simply adored her, she was more or less compared to a pretty flower as she was growing up. At the age of 4, the Maedas had been blessed (or, as the parents later put it, cursed) with their secondborn, Kiyoshi. Aya was pretty ecstatic at being a big sister, though as both children grew older it was clear that their parents viewed the elder as a blossom, and the younger as a wilted flower that paled when compared to the blossom. It didn't necessarily stop Aya from trying her hardest to support her little brother where her parents would not. Though, she soon found herself having to focus more on her own problems as she got into med school. She had wanted to become a doctor, and found that physical therapy was pretty much her ballpark to learn in. Oh, right. Jobs. That was another source of division when it came to what Aya's parents supported. Her brother wanted to be a singer. She wanted to be a doctor. You do the math. That's more or less how she's been spending the first few years she's had out of high school. It's a tough road ahead but she feels like she can stomach it.
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Raspberly
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Post by Raspberly on Jan 26, 2019 22:52:31 GMT
*vomits out an approval* 1/2
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Post by Spire on Jan 30, 2019 14:04:24 GMT
2/2 approved!
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Post by Ayaka and Coolmon on Mar 26, 2019 5:37:36 GMT
First off, replace Justimon's image coding with this since what's there now is hella broken:
[img src="https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/517488183869571074/548730022278594602/megacoolmon.png" alt=" "]
Now then. For the real edits.
For Pucchiemon:
Replace the description for Faerie Barrier with:
Faerie Barrier: Coolmon’s best move in this form is to form a barrier in front of her and two allies. This barrier is like a wall. A wall to bounce attacks back with. Unfortunately this only works for certain with Rookies. With Champion levels, it'll hold for a single attack and nothing more. With Ultimate? The shield can tank a single hit before breaking. Above? You’re screwed. 3 post cooldown. The barrier itself lasts for as long as Coolmon can hold it up, which is a post.
And add these two RAM Upgrades:
Special Beam Cannon [RAM Upgrade]: Coolmon puts two fingers to her forehead and briefly charges up a beam of light before she puts those fingers forward and fires it, the beam threatening to pierce through shields! Two turn cooldown.
Above Average Coolness [Passive RAM Upgrade]: Coolmon exudes so much raw coolness that attacks just don't do as much damage as they should. 20% damage reduction, baby!
For Antylamon:
Fingerguns [RAM Upgrade]: Antylamon points her arms forward and fires a salvo of energy bullets towards an enemy. They're electrical in appearance, but otherwise don't really lean anywhere in terms of what element they'd fall under. One post cooldown.
Rabbit Bullet [RAM Upgrade] Antylamon leaps high into the air before she dives down, headfirst into a foe as she hardens into Chrome Digizoid as though she were preparing her Arm Bomber. This can and WILL go through shields and damage reduction if it hits! Three turn cooldown.
For Justimon:
Digizoid Barrier [RAM Upgrade]: A nonconventional form of the Trinity Arm, Justimon brings the arm forward as it expands into a shield that is capable of reflecting one Mega or lower level move back at an opponent, and tanking other moves quite well! Three turn cooldown.
Justice Saber [RAM Upgrade]: Justimon converts the Trinity Arm into it's Critical Arm form, before she rushes an opponent down in an attempt to slice them with a blade made of white hot plasma, coming out of the end of the arm. One turn cooldown.
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Amelie
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Post by Amelie on Mar 26, 2019 20:48:55 GMT
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Post by D-Reaper Scout on Mar 27, 2019 0:56:55 GMT
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Post by Ayaka and Coolmon on Sept 30, 2019 19:08:12 GMT
Hey, got something for ya. No, it's not a super mega (that comes next). It's just a holosuit change for Coolmon. Faceclaim: Revolutionary Girl Utena - Tenjou Utena - Coolmon
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Amelie
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Post by Amelie on Oct 1, 2019 18:35:52 GMT
Approved.
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Post by Ayaka and Coolmon on Oct 31, 2019 6:15:28 GMT
Hey, remember when I said a Super Mega came next? Super Mega - BiomergeSpecies: LordKnightmon X Appearance: Attribute: Virus Family/ies: Virus Busters Type: Holy Knight Fighting Style: The union of a student and a cool rabbit produces what might be viewed as a stereotypical paladin. It is, in fact, not a paladin it at all. LordKnightmon does not smite things, nor does she lay a gentle hand upon anything. LordKnightmon slices her foes to shreds with a blade and her shield, and in addition has a rather frightening knowledge of the battlefield thanks to her helm. Abilities:Winged Herald [Passive]: Clad head to toe in pristine, and absolutely durable Digizoid armor, LordKnightmon X takes 30% reduced damage from all sources, unless they pierce through active shields. In which case, they deal full damage. Millennium Eye [Passive]: The red crystal on LordKnightmon X’s helmet enables it to analyze the battlefield around her, as well as the opponent she is currently engaged with. In terms of tangible, and/or toggleable effects? When toggled, it enables the knight’s next attack to strike in such a way that it ignores -everything.- Passive resistances, active shields, etc. When Millennium Eye is applied to an attack that already has piercing properties, it instead doubles some aspect of the attack that will be mentioned there. Of course, Coolmon and Aya can only do this once every three turns. Remnant Lance: LordKnightmon X raises her blade aloft, the gem at the hilt glowing briefly before she fires forth a spear of light from said gem. Her target’s currently active cooldowns are all increased by two should this rather forlorn-looking wave of light strike, or worse, pierce through them. Three turn cooldown. Mirror Force: LordKnightmon X attempts to utilize her shield to stop an attack dead in its tracks. Melee attackers are halted entirely, and ranged attacks are deflected back at their sources. Debuffs -will- activate, but only last a turn. Should Mirror Force come into contact with an ability that bears a once-per-thread duration, the damage and/or debuff durations will be halved, and the cooldown on Mirror Force will increase to six turns. Also, you...really can't apply Millennium Eye to this. Four turn cooldown. Lord of Fraternity: LordKnightmon X’s wings, as well as her sashblades extend and reveal that they’re in fact razor sharp, before they whip and slash the area surrounding her, in an attempt to carve any three nearby foes into ribbons. This attack will pierce through any active forms of damage reduction/nullification, and will deal double damage if Millennium Eye is applied to it. If so, the attack tries to strike for whatever weak points an opponent might hold, or in the absence of those? MAKE a weak point. Four turn cooldown. Noblesse of Rouge: LordKnightmon X unleashes a hail of petals towards her opponent, the petals themselves carrying the risk of slowing her opponent down some, before she closes whatever gaps there may be between them, and unleashing a fierce blow from her blade. Two turn cooldown. Armor of Thorns: The jewels on LordKnightmon X’s entire body turn a bloody red rather than a brilliant green as the knight gains a boon most insidious for three turns. All damage that LordKnightmon X suffers from melee attacks during these three turns will be reflected back towards her opponent, spikes erupting from wherever she may be struck to ensure this. The spikes themselves deal half the damage that LordKnightmon X suffered in that turn. Three turn cooldown. Rose’s Lash: A far more simplistic attack, LordKnightmon X strikes out with her Rose Fencer to deal a moderate amount of damage to her target. Flare of the Just: LordKnightmon swings her blade to fire forth a quick blast of light for a foe that sears upon the slightest touch. One post cooldown. Red Mode I - Red Layer (Plot Reward): An approximation of the D-Reaper's shield, usable once per thread and lasting for three posts. On use, the user appears pure red, and physical damage is halved over the duration. On direct contact with an enemy, either by touching or being attacked, a thick red residue is applied to the enemy's point of contact. Lasting for a post, heavy burning damage, similar to tar, is inflicted over the area. It is also corrosive, effective against mechanical opponents. Digivolves from: Maeda Ayaka + Any of Coolmon's Prior Forms
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Post by D-Reaper Scout on Nov 2, 2019 17:39:47 GMT
Armor of Thorns either needs to be once per thread or cover one or the other. It just creates autowin situations otherwise.
I'd say just keep the melee half.
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Post by Ayaka and Coolmon on Nov 2, 2019 18:48:12 GMT
God, I hate editing on mobile. Nonetheless, should be good.
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